Official Review: Primeval Origins by B.A. Vonsik

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Re: Official Review: Primeval Origins by B.A. Vonsik

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Reading the review it does not seem like the author setup his story and plot well leading to issues with how the story is presented and developed. What makes this matter worse is that there seems to be some major grammatical and editing errors in the novel as well. As the premise of the story is not unique or inspiring i don't think that it would be very interesting to read even if the issues mentioned were fixed.
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