Official Review: Metzra by M. U. Phoenix

[kandscreeley]

Thanks hsimone. It was a little disappointing.

[AnanyaAk]

The plot sounded so interesting! But your review was so funny I'm still laughing. Your simile about the submarine is priceless! Loved the Review, but judging by it, I think I'll pass on the book.

[Sebasrodalba]

This must have been an annoying book to read. I'm clearly not looking forward to the sequel.

[kandscreeley]

Thanks guys. Hopefully this one will get more editing and improve.

[Mpimbadav]

You make me loving this book.

[Paul78]

From the review it shows that the author has alot to do on the book to gain acceptability by the audience.
It is my hope that the author will take the rating positively and make the relevant points of correction and improvement.

[Rosemary Okoko]

This book was definitely not edited and i will not waste my time looking for it. I like easy reads and for this reason will not bother with this one. Thank you for the information.

[Paul78]

Writing a book is supposed to be taken seriously like a building project.
You ignore the details, the building crumbles and your ego hurt.
The most difficult part of a receiver is to pass a no confidence motion on a book while they acknowledge the much work that the author has put into the project.

-- 15 Nov 2017, 05:16 --

Writing a book is like one person who is having a building project. The end result either makes one proud or full of regrets.
I think the editorial proof reading and reviews which are private in nature would have helped the author so that the book can be improved.
A poor rating is a wake up call for the author to consider all people who are going to be his audience.

[The Researcher]

Nice review as always. It is bad that the author did not take the time to develop the plot fully, otherwise judging from your review, the novel could have come out better.

[ZeroChill]

I think the writer could have done much better. I was thinking of taking this book, but thanks god I was saved ?

[baley]

nice try. its upon this little realization of correction which brings up the great write in you.

[inaramid]

"Like a submarine with a screen door"

Best simile ever!

That's a shame. The cover looks so nice, too.

[Mary Garrison]

Thanks for the honest review, I don't think I'll be reading this book anytime soon. Maybe you gave the author a few things to think about and the next one might be a great read.