Official Review: The heavenly rocker by Ruth Finnegan

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Official Review: The heavenly rocker by Ruth Finnegan

Post by MsTri » 09 Oct 2017, 17:53

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The heavenly rocker" by Ruth Finnegan.]
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1 out of 4 stars
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Many famous authors have mentioned dreams as the inspiration for their books, and so it is with Ruth Finnegan’s The Heavenly Rocker, The Angel’s Little Sister Plays Merry Heaven and Hell. This is the story of an angel - referred to as “L'il Ole Lil” - who is dissatisfied in Heaven, despite being God’s chief lute player and harpist. As such, L'il decides to abandon Heaven and go to hell, where she proceeds to wreak havoc in Lucifer’s domain, causing the occupants to dance and otherwise make merry. Will Lucifer allow such a travesty in his halls? Will L'il recreate hell? Will hell’s occupants actually live happily ever after? You’ll have to read this tale to find out.

On second thought, you may be better off NOT reading it. This story was only 47 pages, and I finished it in one sitting, but it was a rough 47 pages. While I think there may have been a good story somewhere, I had trouble finding it. The formatting was unusual, and the wording itself was all over the place. The author rarely noted who exactly was speaking, and even when I did know who was speaking, I had trouble making out just what they were supposed to be saying. Ms. Finnegan also had a bad habit of unnecessarily writing in rhyme or alliteration. “Well perhaps that’s wise. (To hell and well and sell and shell it out an’ tell it all (I will!)). And maybe, just maybe, when she gets back she’ll take up trumpeting, windy winging winding instrumentationing, well just maybe” is an example of one of the many passages that had me scratching my head.

In the Author’s Notes at the end of the book, Ms. Finnegan says, “The variations from ‘ordinary’ language, grammar, and spelling reflect both the dreamlike quality of the action (and its origin) and the sound features of the text as it came to me...This is also the reason for the occasional...many somewhat Hopkinesque resonances which sometimes develop into a run of similar-sounding words (sometimes rhyming, sometimes not) where again it is the sounds that matter.” While I understand what she means intellectually, her presentation left a lot to be desired, and I think the book would have been better off if it had been written in an “ordinary” and linear fashion. As it was, I felt more like I was on a bad LSD trip than in a dream.

In addition to the off-putting formatting and writing style, the grammar itself was bad, with almost every page including both misspellings and words that were mashed together. I don’t know if that was part of Ms. Finnegan’s “dreamlike” writing, but it made reading even more of a chore than it already was.

I also had trouble connecting with any of the characters, including the angel’s brother, who acted as the story’s narrator. God, the archangel Michael, and St. Peter were all mentioned in passing, but were not integral parts of the story.

It is with a heavy heart that I must give The Heavenly Rocker 1 out of 4 stars. I had such high hopes for this short tale, but they came crashing to the ground just like L'il Ole Lil came crashing from Heaven.

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Post by kandscreeley » 10 Oct 2017, 09:02

Wow! I'm sorry this one was so disappointing. It sounds a little out there to me. I'm glad I didn't choose this one. Thanks for the review, though.
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Post by MsTri » 10 Oct 2017, 09:06

It really was, @kandscreeley. I HAD to pick another book and start reading it, just to get the bad taste out of my mouth.

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Post by geoffrey ngoima » 10 Oct 2017, 11:09

Haha, it must have been hilarious reading thru this book. It looks like it needs a lot of work.

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Post by KeriCraven » 10 Oct 2017, 17:23

This does sound like it would be an interesting plot. However, I am sorry that it did not appease your reading needs. There are those books that make us happy and stick with us for days. Then there are the books that we question why we even read it to begin with. Thank you for your review.

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Post by Spirit Wandering » 12 Oct 2017, 19:28

You really captured my attention with the first paragraph of your review. It is unfortunate that the book itself didn't live up to your introduction of it. Thanks for the review.
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Post by Alicnim » 14 Oct 2017, 06:21

A very insightful review, great read. Not for me though, the book's concept sounds confusing.

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Post by ashley_claire » 16 Oct 2017, 15:36

Though the book may have left something to be desired, I really enjoyed reading your review! The plot seems like an interesting idea, but I'll have to pass on this one.

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Post by Ashley Simon » 17 Oct 2017, 13:54

Yikes! Don't think this one will be making it to my TBR list anytime soon.

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Post by Quinto » 27 Oct 2017, 08:14

So much for the divine inspiration behind the book. Where did she let her guard down? I wonder...Nice review.

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Post by jeminah28 » 29 Oct 2017, 07:58

Nice review but the book sounds not appealing to me. Thanks for sharing anyway, i learned in your writing style. Thanks.
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Post by Kalin Adi » 07 Dec 2017, 16:31

An angel that decides to go to hell to play musical instruments harmoniously there is not my cup of tea, I must say. Even if it was just a dream, I find this plot quite egregious. Thanks for the honest review!

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