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[Following is the official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Time Warped Travelers Part Two Later That Month" by Robert Westfall.]
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This is the second book of a fantasy adventure series chronicling the exploits of time travelling Tommy Evans and his friends. Along with his girlfriend and fellow time traveller, Beth Howard, he attempts to help the people he comes across who are generally being exploited, ripped off and then set to lose anything that's left over in the approaching Great Depression.

Most of the action takes place in and around the town of 'Blainesville', Ohio, in the year 1922, although there are frequent excursions forward to the present day to pick up various supplies (whisky, life saving drugs, useful friends and anything else they need from 2012) and to use modern technology (washing machines and the internet). The story spans a few weeks during which Tommy uncovers a scam to embezzle funds from the townsfolk and devises a cunning plan to try to stop the perpetrators.

Although Prohibition is in full swing, Tommy and his friends find imaginative ways to side step the anti-alcohol laws while taking full advantage of the fact that marijuana and cocaine are legal at this period; at times it's hard to see how they are in a fit state to get anything done. Also side tracking him from his good intentions is his relationship with Beth which is very physical, raunchy and frankly gymnastic; recounted in Tommy's words, nothing is left to the imagination. The author does warn in the Prologue that the book is not suitable for readers under the age of eighteen.

Meanwhile, lurking in the background, are two Immortals who put in an appearance from time to time. The good one, Miguel, is there to aid Tommy in his mission to help the needy and deprived people he meets in the past, while the wicked Clock Watcher is out to thwart him and generally make life miserable by his evil deeds.

The author has created a cast of strong, appealing characters. We see them through Tommy's eyes since most of the story is narrated in the first person by him, and his opinions are blunt and often unflattering. The main characters are introduced in the Prologue and, as well as a short description, the author has included contemporary 1920s photographs of them, which is a nice touch.

Tommy himself is quite engaging and is a natural for the part of the lovable rogue. He is self-deprecating, equivocal and aware of his faults; although he finds himself cast as the hero, he is not above bending the law to get what he wants, and he is quite at home in his dealings with the mafia, bootleggers and other irregular entrepreneurs.

The whole tone of this book is humorous and the style is chatty and unpretentious. The language, using Tommy's words, is certainly earthy, but the intention is to amuse rather than offend. Below the surface the author touches on a number of issues, apart from the obvious battle between good and evil, including corruption, hypocrisy and racism.

It was a distinct disadvantage not having read the first book of the series. The Prologue helps a bit by introducing the characters, the setting and some of the events leading up to the point at which this part starts, but it can't explain everything. I'm still in the dark as to the mechanics of time travel or how Tommy first discovered it. This could turn out to be quite a long series as the ending makes it evident that there are more adventures to follow and the possibilities are virtually limitless.

Overall I quite enjoyed this light-hearted romp through time and I have rated the book three out of four stars. The author's / Tommy's sense of humour is apparent throughout; the characters are likeable (at least the good guys are) and I found myself hoping that things go ok for them. There are various interweaving plots and subplots, and some clever twists whereby Tommy gets to meet the antecedents of people he knows in 2012. Unfortunately there were a number of errors in the Kindle version I read which I found rather distracting - hopefully these will be corrected for future editions.

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Thanks to Casper for their great and very fair assessment of my book. It was completely what I expected and I'd send them a Kindle version of part one if they'd want one, on my dime.

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robbie 1 wrote:Thanks to Casper for their great and very fair assessment of my book. It was completely what I expected and I'd send them a Kindle version of part one if they'd want one, on my dime.

Robert Westfall

Thank you - I hope my review gives other readers a good idea of your book. And I'd like to take you up on that offer to read part one. I reckon the meeting between Tommy and Beth must have been pretty momentous.

Congratulations on creating such memorable characters. I wish you every success with the rest of the series.
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Okay Casper, I'll send you a free Kindle of TWT part one. just let me know how to send it.
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This looks different, and rather humorous. Great review. Let us know how the first book compares to the second.
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I enjoyed both books, but have to say I preferred the second. Although the first book is written in the same easy-to-read, humorous style (slightly more restrained!), by the second book the characters are even more developed and the plot and sub-plots more complex. It would be interesting to know whether the author: 1) meticulously planned every episode when he first conceived the idea of the story; 2) had a general idea of where the main story was heading and sorts out the details at the start of each book; or 3) had no idea at all and just writes it as it comes into his head.
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# 3 is more like my style. I had a beginning and an end, but the middle came to me week by week. I hate outlines; they've never worked for me. I much prefer to let my wild-ass imagination run wild. Thanks, Casper, for taking the time to read it.

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This sounds fun and interesting. I'll have to give it a try.
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It sounds like a fun read. According to you, it is better to start from the first book to understand the background. I am glad you enjoyed the book and hope the errors you have mentioned were fixed up by now. Thank you for the review!
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I think the setting and humor of this book sounds promising. But I don't think it would be worth it to start with the second book. Interesting review!
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Sounds like a pretty interesting story. I love that there is time travel involved, but there is also humor. Humor makes the world go around. Thanks for the review.
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This book was a real hit. The storyline was very interesting. If you are interested in science fiction stories this book is definitely for you.
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This sounds like a hoot and a very fun read. I'll have to look up part one and then maybe I'll tackle this one as well. Thanks for the review.
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I enjoyed your thorough review. The book doesn't seem like my cup of tea due to it having several errors and not good as a standalone. Glad you liked the book despite the issues you mentioned.
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Sounds like an interesting and entertaining tale of time travel. I think I would read the first in the series. Thanks for the great interpretation of the book!
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