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Official Review: Spawn of my error by Griff D. Johnson

Post by Miriam Molina » 27 May 2019, 02:28

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Spawn of my error" by Griff D. Johnson.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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Griff D. Johnson is a Christian, albeit not the usual one. He refuses to believe that God created man and woman for them to disobey Him and for Him to punish them. God is love personified, so how can He be so cruel? Johnson’s musings keep him busy, and one day, Eve herself comes to tell him the naked truth. Spawn of My Error: Eve’s Odyssey is the result of his five years of fellowship with Eve, the mother of all living.

One fine evening, Eve apprises him, “Dude, I have an interview with News One Southern California. It’s time to tell all.” It’s apparently time to reveal why God allowed the first couple to fall.

Johnson utilizes interesting characters in this fantasy piece. These include the media people, heroes and villains from Revelation in the Bible, human brainchildren like Tarzan, the blue Avatars, and the Greek mythological character Cassandra, and many more. The hodgepodge can be entertaining to the reader who loves trivia, but it may be endlessly confusing to one who wants focus in a book.

I can divide the book into five distinct parts. The first centers on the main characters: Eve, Dude, and the media people, Rick, Cindy, and Stan. We also meet the media mascot, the dog Chipper. This part culminates with the televised interview. Parts two to five see more characters and scenarios being introduced. I am wont to think of the five parts as separate stories. Of the five, I found the story on the moon, the fourth, the hardest to appreciate. The devils there gave me one hell of a time. I struggled to comprehend their cryptic “demon-speak” and cringed at their diabolical guffaws. (I am sure that hell would be eternal torture; I better do my best not to end up there.)

The book is rife with paragraphs discussing God’s goodness and expounding on Christian values. However, being a “free-thinking” Christian, Johnson also employs provocative language and expletives galore. These may cause traditional religious folk to cross themselves.

The book is all dialogue, huge chunks of it. There are various challenges in digesting the conversations. The author is averse to dialogue tags, so the reader is left to guess who is talking. This is especially difficult when there are more than two characters conversing. The author also shuns the commas needed in direct address, furthering the confusion. Moreover, his dialogues are peppered with ellipses such that many of the statements are mystifying fragments.

The editing is hideous. The author does not favor commas; he also dislikes hyphens. Apart from the missing punctuation, there are misspellings and misused homophones. As the subject matter is not exactly simple, I had a seriously difficult time deciphering some of the messages.

Johnson has a very fertile imagination, and his book will appeal to those with the same gift. His Eve is intelligent, beautiful, and strong; she also has a unique and stunning power. Women readers will delight in her portrayal. Fans of Revelation will find the moon battle reminiscent of John’s visions, with the added novelty of seeing the devils plotting their malevolent stratagems.

I am giving the book 2 out of 4 stars. I deducted two stars: one for the bad editing and the second for the convoluted conversations. Johnson’s work deserves no less. Readers will come away from it with lots of lessons to ponder and will hopefully understand Eve’s error in judgment on that fateful day in Eden. I suppose this understanding is what Eve asks of us who believe that she is our mother and that we are her spawn.

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Post by kdstrack » 30 May 2019, 12:06

I appreciate your honest comments about this book. It's not for me. Thanks for your review.

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Post by sursangeet_2000 » 31 May 2019, 05:39

The premise seems so interesting. I wish the editing were better. I wish authors cared a little more about presenting their thoughts well. If its not readable, why should even bother reading it?

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Post by evraealtana » 31 May 2019, 19:09

Ugh. Poor editing is an absolute mood-killer. I was so interested in the premise, and so let down by your description of the errors. I don't think I'll put myself through it. Thank you for the review.

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Post by ButterscotchCherrie » 01 Jun 2019, 10:01

Yes, the premise sounds right up my alley - you know I'm a demon fan! Shame it didn't deliver and that the editing was poor. Thanks for your thorough and thoughtful review.

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Post by Bluebird03 » 02 Jun 2019, 08:59

The author seems to have a creative imagination, but should have focused a bit more on the editing. After reading your comments, I think I'll work harder to avoid hell as well. Thank you for a most entertaining review!

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Post by Wyland » 04 Jun 2019, 03:08

This seems different from your everyday religious books. I’ll want to read Johnson’s perspective on a topic that has been read widely by both the religious and laity. Thanks for the informative review.

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Post by Miriam Molina » 04 Jun 2019, 04:05

Wyland wrote:
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This seems different from your everyday religious books. I’ll want to read Johnson’s perspective on a topic that has been read widely by both the religious and laity. Thanks for the informative review.
Well, Johnson is not your ordinary Christian. If you do get to read this, do tell about your experience. Thank you for your visit.

P.S. Is that you in your avatar?

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Post by Miriam Molina » 04 Jun 2019, 04:06

ButterscotchCherrie wrote:
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Yes, the premise sounds right up my alley - you know I'm a demon fan! Shame it didn't deliver and that the editing was poor. Thanks for your thorough and thoughtful review.
I appreciate your visit, demon fan! :twisted2:

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Post by Miriam Molina » 04 Jun 2019, 17:55

kdstrack wrote:
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I appreciate your honest comments about this book. It's not for me. Thanks for your review.
Thanks for visiting and commenting. Johnson wants people to know all about Eve. I hope he finds his audience.

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Post by Prisallen » 05 Jun 2019, 12:01

"These may cause traditional religious folk to cross themselves." I really like your sense of humor. The editing issues seem bad enough to keep me from reading this book, as it sounds like it would be confusing to read. Thank you for a thorough and interesting review!

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Post by Miriam Molina » 05 Jun 2019, 14:24

Prisallen wrote:
05 Jun 2019, 12:01
"These may cause traditional religious folk to cross themselves." I really like your sense of humor. The editing issues seem bad enough to keep me from reading this book, as it sounds like it would be confusing to read. Thank you for a thorough and interesting review!
Thanks for getting the punch line. I appreciate your feedback.

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Post by Miriam Molina » 05 Jun 2019, 14:40

Bluebird03 wrote:
02 Jun 2019, 08:59
The author seems to have a creative imagination, but should have focused a bit more on the editing. After reading your comments, I think I'll work harder to avoid hell as well. Thank you for a most entertaining review!
Thanks for the sweet words. Yes, we don't want to go to hell!

I hope Johnson can at least correct the errors. The "all-dialogue" style is more than enough challenge for the reader.
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Post by Miriam Molina » 05 Jun 2019, 15:02

sursangeet_2000 wrote:
31 May 2019, 05:39
The premise seems so interesting. I wish the editing were better. I wish authors cared a little more about presenting their thoughts well. If its not readable, why should even bother reading it?
It was quite a challenge to read. I hope Johnson can address the issues to make his messages transmit clearly.

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Post by Miriam Molina » 05 Jun 2019, 15:24

evraealtana wrote:
31 May 2019, 19:09
Ugh. Poor editing is an absolute mood-killer. I was so interested in the premise, and so let down by your description of the errors. I don't think I'll put myself through it. Thank you for the review.
I hope Johnson irons out the kinks to make the book easier to handle. Thanks for the visit.

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