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Official Review: Tea With Nanny by Andrea Simmons

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Official Review: Tea With Nanny by Andrea Simmons

Post Number:#1 by Kat Kennedy
» 07 Nov 2017, 12:46

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Tea With Nanny" by Andrea Simmons.]

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1 out of 4 stars
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Tea with Nanny by Andrea Simmons is a Southern novel tracing three generations of women living on a Tennessee farm. The novel follows the lives of Josephine (Nanny), Elizabeth (Birdie) and Willow. The book is divided into three sections, one for each female character, with the first two told from Birdie’s point-of-view and the third, from Willow’s.

Birdie, whose mother was killed in a car accident when she was eight, lives on the family farm with her grandparents, Nanny and Cecil Crow. Her father, Jon O’Connor, wanders in and out of Birdie’s life with various girlfriends and in varying degrees of drunkenness. Nanny and Cecil also have a daughter, Ophelia, who takes on the role of pampering Birdie by buying her school clothes and taking her out for lunch. Ophelia sees herself as giving Birdie someone a little more sophisticated with whom to share her problems. Through Birdie’s eyes, we are given the story of her life with her grandparents. Their struggles and celebrations are told with obvious affection. Nanny is Cherokee and teaches Birdie Native American traditions. They weather the death of Cecil, and when Nanny dies from complications of Alzheimer’s, Birdie takes over the farm. As she sorts through Nanny’s belongings, Birdie discovers she wishes to learn more about her family, especially her mother. Eventually, she is abandoned by a boyfriend and left alone with her daughter, Willow, and she finds she must come to terms with her father’s abandonment and her mother’s death in order to find peace. When Birdie grows old, she is also diagnosed with Alzheimer’s, and it is Willow who must now step in to be her caretaker.

The content of Tea with Nanny is interesting, and there are plenty of touching moments between Birdie and Nanny, and in turn Birdie and Willow, but it is hard to get a grasp on the narrative because of the novel’s lack of structure. The book is divided into three parts, one for each of the main characters, but there are no sub-divisions. The lack of chapters makes the reading tedious and at times confusing as the narrative jumps from one scene to the next without transition. The book is mostly written in exposition, which also leads to a lack of readability, slowing the narrative down. This is a real shame because the story is intriguing with its interpersonal relationships, plot twists and wonderfully descriptive passages.

The book’s many grammatical errors further hurt its readability, and there are a few structural problems with scenes and themes that are introduced in a dramatic way, but then are barely mentioned again. For example, in one dramatic scene near the beginning of the book, it is revealed that Nanny and Cecil have been seeing UFO’s, but the storyline is dropped except for a couple of small mentions near the end of the book, leaving the reader with unanswered questions.

I rate this book 1 out of 4 because of the lack of editing and structure. If the book were restructured and professionally edited, it would be a much better read. It is still an interesting story for anyone who likes to read about life in the South, but one that could be so much better.

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Re: Official Review: Tea With Nanny by Andrea Simmons

Post Number:#2 by Spirit Wandering
» 08 Nov 2017, 20:17

It sounds like the author cared about the characters and the story but lacked sufficient writing skills to put it together into a solid work. That is unfortunate because it seems like the novel had potential. Thanks for the review.
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Re: Official Review: Tea With Nanny by Andrea Simmons

Post Number:#3 by Kat Kennedy
» 08 Nov 2017, 20:41

Yes, I would love to see this book edited and reissued. It has potential.
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Post Number:#4 by kandscreeley
» 08 Nov 2017, 20:53

The unanswered questions would get to me as well as the exposition type narrative. Thanks.
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Re: Official Review: Tea With Nanny by Andrea Simmons

Post Number:#5 by Kat Kennedy
» 08 Nov 2017, 20:56

Thanks, I do hope to see this one edited and reissued.
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Post Number:#6 by Shalini1976
» 09 Nov 2017, 17:47

This book would be interesting to read.
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Post Number:#7 by Kat Kennedy
» 09 Nov 2017, 21:24

There are some interesting things in the book.
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Post Number:#8 by Kat Berg
» 09 Nov 2017, 22:04

Kat Kennedy wrote:Thanks, I do hope to see this one edited and reissued.

I always wonder a little when someone publishes a book long before it was actually ready to be published. Especially when it has the chops to be a good book if given more polishing time. Such a bummer. Thanks for the review.
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Post Number:#9 by Kat Kennedy
» 10 Nov 2017, 09:01

I know what you mean. It makes me sad to see that happen. Thanks for the comment.
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Post Number:#10 by Kalin Adi
» 11 Nov 2017, 20:57

It hurts when authors do not care enough to have their work properly edited, and it's too bad a good plot is wasted among errors too. Thanks for the review!
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Post Number:#11 by Kat Kennedy
» 12 Nov 2017, 01:20

Thank you for the comment!
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Post Number:#12 by Mercy Bolo
» 12 Nov 2017, 19:17

This really is a moving story but with so many editing issues I'll pass on it.
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Post Number:#13 by Kat Kennedy
» 12 Nov 2017, 23:54

Thanks for the reply. Maybe the author will reissue one day!
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Post Number:#14 by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
» 14 Nov 2017, 09:24

This may be said as idyllic life, in essence, pastoral. There are beauty and charm in this rustic mode of living, only to be spoiled by the adversities that life has made the characters endure. The review could hardly be said as remiss in portraying this. Thanks that the lives of the three essential personages in this drama were well delineated. This has incited me to make a go at the book.
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Post Number:#15 by Kat Kennedy
» 14 Nov 2017, 10:46

I’m glad you will read it. Let me know what you think. Thanks for the comment!
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