Official Review: Playing Hurt by Gerald L Nardella

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Official Review: Playing Hurt by Gerald L Nardella

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[Following is the official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Playing Hurt" by Gerald L Nardella.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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On an October evening in 1960, it starts out as any other football game, but it’s the final game of the season for the Park County High Rangers. Brian and the other senior players are determined to win their last ever football game to make it the most memorable game of their lives. Despite their loss and injuries of the evening, the night ends up being even more memorable than expected. A massive fight breaks out amongst the players and spectators, followed by a kegger party, revenge vandalism, a police chase, and arson.

On top of all that, Brian’s mind is preoccupied with his girlfriend Deanie, who is upset with him about the events of the previous night. But Deanie has problems of her own now that her ex-boyfriend is back in town from California; he has his own plans for Deanie and refuses to take no for an answer. For Brian and Deanie, all of the events of that unforgettable night continue to haunt them for months to come.

Playing Hurt is a memoir-like tale of a group of youngsters living in a small town back in a time when there wasn’t much for them to do except drive around in their cars and “park” up on the cliffs. Gerald Nardella gives readers a pretty accurate depiction of what it was like to be a teenager during this time, with boys having only one thing on their minds and girls finding only one way to keep their boyfriends interested in them. This book contain some strong language and lots of strong sexual references, but it is not too graphic for a young adult audience.

I enjoyed reading this book for its quick pace and easy-to-follow story. It is engaging and certainly a page-turner, with lots of action and interesting characters, who are easy to both love and hate at the same time. About a third of the book takes place in the single night of the opening football game; this is my own personal preference with reading, but I love it when books takes place within a short time frame like this. I also love how so many tiny details from the opening of the book come back to become important later on in the story, and I have to commend the author for such a well-planned plot, with every word being relevant to the story.

I found a few typographical errors throughout the book, but they did not detract from the overall quality of the story. However, the formatting of my electronic book was a bit awkward at times, though I am sure that this is not the fault of the author but is likely the result of some error when converting to Kindle format. For example, paragraphs are not indented, and sometimes sections of dialogue between characters appear to be combined into a single paragraph. Some hyphens have been cut out, such as "rockand-roll" and "purple-andgold" (sic).

It would be easy for readers to criticize this book for being sexist and for encouraging abusive behavior toward women. But given the setting of the story and the time period in which it takes place, I just found the story to be more believable, and I often had to question whether this story is fact or fiction. I give Playing Hurt a rating of 4 out of 4 stars and recommend this book to those who would enjoy taking a short trip back in time a few decades.

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Fantastic review, ALynn. The skill with which you has summarised the story in the first two paragraphs is amazing.
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chytach18- wrote:Fantastic review, ALynn. The skill with which you has summarised the story in the first two paragraphs is amazing.
You know, summarizing a book is actually really hard!!! I think I'm getting better at it, so it makes me happy that you say something!! Thank you!!!
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Thank you, Alynn for your wonderful, positive review of my book. You indeed summarized the story quite well in the first two paragraphs. I would like to point out that in your third paragraph, you mentioned "Gerald Butler". I think you meant to say Gerald Nardella. It is too bad that you did not have a book cover to display with your comments. Is it too late to add one?

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nards22 wrote:Thank you, Alynn for your wonderful, positive review of my book. You indeed summarized the story quite well in the first two paragraphs. I would like to point out that in your third paragraph, you mentioned "Gerald Butler". I think you meant to say Gerald Nardella. It is too bad that you did not have a book cover to display with your comments. Is it too late to add one?

Jerry Nardella

:shock:

:lol:

:lol:

I can't stop laughing. Obviously I have you confused with Gerard Butler.
I have informed an administrator and will get it changed presently.
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HA HA HA! Great review! I also like books that focus in on a small timeframe. Sounds like one crazy night!!

Congrats to Mr. Nardella! I uploaded a photo for you, but if you wanted a different image, then just let someone know. :-)
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zeldas_lullaby wrote:HA HA HA! Great review! I also like books that focus in on a small timeframe. Sounds like one crazy night!!

Congrats to Mr. Nardella! I uploaded a photo for you, but if you wanted a different image, then just let someone know. :-)
Hey, thanks for that. It doesn't show up in the review, but at least it does on Bookshelves.
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You're welcome! It's showing up on my screen (on the review). Weirdness.
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Hey, great review! I like the setting and the portrayal of teenagers during a different time. Earlier this year I reviewed a book that was set in the 1950's - seems it was a much heavier read than this, dealing with issues as child molestation, incest, and murder - but the setting in the far-enough-away but yet not-too-distant past made for an interesting read. This sounds similar.

Oh, those boys and girls! The more things change, the more they stay the same, 'eh?
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I know, right. Aside from the cool hip slang the kids are using to mark the time period, they're still pretty much the same.
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Interesting premise for a book. Nice review!
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Jesska6029 wrote:Interesting premise for a book. Nice review!
Thanks.
Methinks it could be a true story. Or a movie. But it is a pretty good book!
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Hi Alynn,
There are events and characters in the story that are similar to my remembrances, but the story is fiction. What did you mean when you said "or a movie"?

Thanks again for the positive review.

Jerry Nardella
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nards22 wrote:Hi Alynn,
There are events and characters in the story that are similar to my remembrances, but the story is fiction. What did you mean when you said "or a movie"?

Thanks again for the positive review.

Jerry Nardella
It's something I could easily see being turned into a movie! I'm trying to picture the cast right now! :)
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Wow! Lets do it.
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