Official Review: Book of Little Short Stories VOL. 1

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Official Review: Book of Little Short Stories VOL. 1

Post by TheMusicalMuse » 02 Apr 2015, 08:21

[Following is the official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Book of Little Short Stories VOL. 1" by Delores Cole.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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In “Book of Little Short Stories, Volume 1”, Delores Cole presents vignettes steeped in her Native American history. Each story comes equipped with a moral or lesson, many based in the belief systems inherent to the broad Native American culture. Ms. Cole’s imagination shines brilliantly through her writing; she spins tales of spirits and magic inspired by worlds of which one might only dream.

Ms. Cole’s desire to pass on the wisdom of her culture drives her creative spirit. Her short stories last, at the most, ten pages, but she packs each one with moral lessons. While every tale contains a different nugget of truth, the overarching theme of these stories is finding one’s identity within one’s self and using that as a motivation and a reason to follow one’s dreams. Regardless of who plays the lead in each act—usually a Native American or a young girl searching for identity—the reader follows them on a journey of self-discovery.

I appreciate the author’s passion for her theme, as well as her respect for her Native American heritage. The key conflict facing teenagers and young adults—and even older adults who do not settle this issue in earlier years—is finding a locus of identity from which they can grow and dream. Throughout her collection, Ms. Cole addresses this issue by writing about the benefits of trusting yourself rather than looking for external motivators and sources of identity. She sometimes even steps out of the story to address the reader individually, encouraging him or her to step out on a journey of self-discovery. While this writing technique tends to be a bit jarring at times, it can also be effective in conveying a point about which the author demonstrates a good deal of passion.

My favorite of the stories in this volume is “Short Bedtime Stories”, a series of even shorter tales directed mainly toward young children. Though not all of the bedtime stories lend themselves well to youngsters about to drift into dreamland, they are generally pleasant to read without having to invest a great deal of time into them, similar in a way to Aesop’s Fables. Ms. Cole expresses herself most clearly in small samples of her writing, and her charming ideas make for cute and novel tales for children in this compilation within a compilation.

However, charming ideas do not a proficient author make. Writing a book of any type takes a great deal of dedication and commitment, so I can’t help but wonder why Ms. Cole, after investing so much time and energy into her project, did not also invest in the services of a proofreader or editor. While she possesses remarkable talent for spinning stories in her mind, she does not have the same fluency on paper. The grammar in this book is inappropriately used and sometimes downright unreadable. I’m not referring to split infinitives or overuse of verbs of being—subjects I view as more complex issues of the English language. No, I could hardly get past issues like subject-verb disagreement, verb tense confusion, double negatives, and—the problem that caused me to shudder the most—incorrect use of past and present perfect (i.e. “have came”).

The sentence structure and vocabulary usage also seems quite young. The writing settles comfortably in the 5th-7th grade reading level on both the Raygor Readability and Fry graphs, yet I believe Ms. Cole’s target audience to be adult, or at the very least, mid-teens. This, along with the grammar issues mentioned above, made it difficult for me to finish reading this volume, especially as the stories became more and more similar in theme and character the further I progressed into the collection of stories.

Overall, I give “Book of Little Short Stories, Volume 1” 2 out of 4 stars. Unfortunately, Ms. Cole’s passion for her subject matter was stunted by her inexpert writing style. However, I could not give this book a 1 because, should Ms. Cole wish to revise her writing or employ a proofreader, her ideas and creativity possess enough power to produce an inspiring collection of short stories.

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Post by Rachaelamb1 » 06 Apr 2015, 19:39

Good review. It is important to have an editor! Grammar issues make reading a book a chore rather than a delight.

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Post by TheMusicalMuse » 07 Apr 2015, 15:47

Thanks! I'm new to reviewing, so I probably slaved over this more than I needed to.

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Post by Jesska6029 » 07 Apr 2015, 20:40

Good review! Very nice detail of what works and does not work in the short stories.
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Post by bookowlie » 08 Apr 2015, 17:45

Nice, insightful review! I like that many of the stories are steeped in Native American culture. It's always a good thing when you can learn something from a book. Still, serious grammatical errors can be a real distraction!
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Post by Tanaya » 14 Aug 2015, 15:59

Such a shame about the grammatical errors. It's always disappointing when that takes away from enjoying the actual story. Learning more about Native American culture would be interesting. I appreciate that you give the reader a fair wealth of information to decide, while warning about the downfalls. Great review!

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Post by Theresa cahill » 24 Jan 2016, 15:31

Not usually a fan of short stories

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Post by klbradley » 23 Jul 2016, 23:12

Nice review-- thanks for posting it! Hopefully the author will have another editor take a look so that it can get a better rating.
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Post by kimmyschemy06 » 14 Dec 2016, 06:36

That was a very honest review. I love stories about self discovery and I'm sure I would enjoy this collection if not for the list of errors you mentioned. Great job on the review.

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Post by Insightsintobooks » 08 Jan 2017, 10:44

This sounds like a book I would love to read. That being said I'm not sure I would be able to read it with all the errors you mentioned. Hopefully the author redoes the book with proper editing as it does sound like one I would enjoy.

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