Official Review: Diamond Girl by Michael Thomason

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Official Review: Diamond Girl by Michael Thomason

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Diamond Girl" by Michael Thomason.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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Jack Caldwell is a teenager who has been through a lot in his short life. Although he manages to hide the hurt behind his passion for baseball and his nonchalant attitude, life has confronted him with a fair share of traumatic events. Jack’s mom runs away, leaving her teenage kids behind with an alcoholic father. If that was not enough, Jack loses the woman he adores the most: his older sister Christina. Christina’s death, caused by an overdose, robs Jack of the only support system he has ever known. When Amy, a cute Japanese-American girl, enters his life, he feels like something might be starting to work in his favor. Amy is Jack’s Diamond Girl. He feels like they are made for each other. However, Amy eventually discovers a secret that was supposed to be buried. Christina and Jack share something that should be kept hidden away, a memory that refuses to fade, a secret that keeps him awake at night. What happened to them?

Diamond Girl goes back and forth between Jack’s teenage years and his modern life. When he meets Donna in the bar he works at, he knows he can’t let her get away without regretting it for the rest of his life. The book follows Jack’s relationship with Donna, their marriage, and its decline. He feels like Donna is the perfect match for him, until their daughter’s illness puts an irreparable strain on their marriage.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading Diamond Girl. Although the plotline might not seem particularly exciting, there were a few elements that made this novel extremely enjoyable to read. Although the narration is not fast-paced, Michael Thomason’s writing style is highly captivating and kept me glued to the pages. Everything in the book, from the events to the dialogues, was written with a vibrancy and an authenticity that made me feel like the author was describing events that happened in real life. In other words, the writing was so vivid that I felt as if I was reading a memoir. I was anxious to discover what would happen to Jack and Amy, how he would recover from the traumas he endured, and if he would continue his baseball career.

Another element that contributed to my enjoyment of the novel is the author’s choice to alternate between Jack’s adult perspective and his teenage years. The alternation between past and present narration is something that would normally annoy me. However, Michael Thomason did a wonderful job of using this stylistic choice to masterfully accompany the reader through Jack’s character development. The reader is able to identify how some of the events and people Jack encountered in his boyhood impacted his adult life. The author carved Jack’s personality in such a masterful way that he felt like someone I was actually close to. By displaying Jack’s inner conflicts, his struggle to bury the pain and the secrets, and his willingness to appear tough and invincible, Michael Thomason captured the essence of boyhood. The author was able to paint a vivid picture of what it means to be a teenage boy with hard feelings, and how that translates into being a grown man who has to learn how to live with them. On top of that, the book also covers several important topics, such as racism, substance abuse, cheating, and loss.

There is only one thing I dislike about the book: its cover design. In fact, I feel like it is plain and does not do justice to the richness contained in the novel. Furthermore, while reading, I came across more than ten errors. While they did not distract me from the book at all, I am forced to subtract a star from the rating. Hence, I rate Diamond Girl by Michael Thomason 3 out of 4 stars. I would have happily given the book a perfect rating, but the errors prevented me from doing so.

I recommend this book to readers who like novels that are centered around character development. I think that older teenagers would greatly benefit from reading this book, as they might easily resonate with Jack. The book has quite a few profanities and erotic scenes, but they are not described in detail.

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I always appreciate a good writing style and love the books that center around characters development :) And I agree, the cover is a bit confusing. Thank you for a great review!
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This is a beautiful review. I feel quite sad for Jack. Why does he have to go through so much. Meanwhile, I'm struggling to reconcile how Donna features if Amy is Jack's diamond girl.
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This sounds like a great character-driven novel! I think I would enjoy it. Great review!
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Sounds like an interesting read. I would like to know more about Jack and Donna's story. Thanks for the detailed and nice review.
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Sounds like an important read. It's hard when a child gest sick, but many parents have to cope with that. Great review!
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Your review is amazing and I feel it mirrors your admiration for the book. I totally love character based books and I am intrigued by Jack:s life. I believe this is beautiful.
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The cover is not eye catching. Though it would be interesting to get to know Jack's life story and the diamond girl.
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The flashbacks would help fill in all the details about Jack's childhood. I am wondering if there is a love triangle developing with both Amy and Donna in Jack's life?? I agree with your comments about the cover! Thanks for this intriguing recommendation.
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Am a good fun of character development books , I would like to read this one in future, thanks for the great review.
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This isn't the sort of book I usually enjoy, but it sounds like a great read for fans of character-driven dramas. Thanks for the review!
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I wonder what Amy uncovered. :eusa-think: I may have to read this book and find out. Great review!
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This is an awesome review and the novel sounds so interesting to read.
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I feel sorry for Jack. I can imagine that Christina's death would be difficult for him. I do hope that he's able to recover. Thanks!
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Great review! This seems like a wonderful book.
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