Overall rating and opinion of "Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War" by Dorothy May Mercer
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Re: Overall rating and opinion of "Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War" by Dorothy May Mercer
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The fiction is too exaggerated and unbelievable. I think the author's imagination is on another level.
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I don't connect with any of the characters as well.
I would rate it 2 out of 4 stars.
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I don't connect with any of the characters as well.
I would rate it 2 out of 4 stars.
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At the risk of sounding condescending, there is a craft to writing a book. It's not enough to have an idea for a story. While there may be several ways to tell a story, there are also common elements to be observed in its construction. Items such as word choice, pacing, proper grammar, proper sentence structure all matter. For example: you could have the most compelling premise ever, but if your pace is deadly-dull, many may not stick around to see how you pay off that premise. That brilliant premise would also be wasted if the sentences are clunky, or the characters come off as dull-witted.
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