First vs. third person
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First vs. third person
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Steve was also written in the first person. That's what confused me - that it was two of them. One would have been easier to explain, but TWO?!TuyetMai wrote: ↑02 Apr 2019, 23:14 Thanks so much for asking this question, this inconsistency confuses me as well. To me, first-person is characterized by the use of “I,” and third-person is characterized by the use of “He,” “She,” or “They.” Therefore, Myra's narration is the only one written in first-person, while the rest is written in third-person. I assumed it was an editing mistake when I was reading, but I'd love to hear what other people think of this.
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I hear what you're saying. But the parts written in third person were omniscient; we hear what Louise, William, and Travis are thinking and feeling, even though it's written as "Louise was angry", "William thought of his grandmother", etc. I didn't see a need for some characters to be speaking themselves (1st) while others could be merely spoken about (3rd), since we get the same information either way. So confusing!Charlyt wrote: ↑03 Apr 2019, 08:33 Perhaps using the third person gives readers a broader area of perspective (of the surroundings, circumstance, other characters) by using the main character of the chapter. And maybe using the first person allows the reader a more intimate insight of the character and what they are thinking. Like, maybe, it was important that the reader knows what Myra was thinking and feeling that it had to be delivered in the first person. I hope that made sense.
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Yes, I agree that the style was a bit confusing at first but then this aspect of the book was helpful while reading it. It certainly took a while before getting used to it though.
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Yes it did. I wonder if his previous books were written in the same style.briellejee wrote: ↑05 Apr 2019, 04:24Yes, I agree that the style was a bit confusing at first but then this aspect of the book was helpful while reading it. It certainly took a while before getting used to it though.
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