Did you have trouble following the timeline?

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Re: Did you have trouble following the timeline?

Post by Ekta Kumari » 08 Dec 2018, 09:23

It was a little confusing when it was jumping from character to character randomly and also the time frame is never made clear to the reader. But for me, it did not took away the joy of reading this book; I was able to comprehend it by keeping track of the timeline.
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Post by Shalu1707 » 10 Dec 2018, 12:37

Yes, there were gaps in timeline and no clear picture of it was drawn by the author to help readers, I dont even know for how long he was on run.

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Post by becsimpson » 11 Dec 2018, 16:40

It definitely got a little confusing at times and broke up the flow of the book, but I managed to get used to it. There’s probably a better way it could have been handled though.

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Post by Moray_001 » 29 Dec 2018, 13:14

Yeah the timeline was confusing. Especially when the author suddenly skipped to 1 year plus into his jail sentence when Hiram escaped from prison. I also wasn’t sure how much time he really spent in each of the places he went to.

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Post by C-Extra22 » 01 Jan 2019, 07:46

I observed the time lapses but it did not deter me from enjoying the story.

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Post by Jessacardinal » 05 Jan 2019, 23:38

I am currently only halfway through the book, but I have struggled a bit with the jumpiness of the story. I find the acceleration of the timeline tends to catch up to itself in later chapters only to jump ahead once again a few pages later.
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