Did you feel like it is a story of a sex-hungry woman

[Katherine Smith]

I think that sex scenes should be used to enhance the story not as the main focus of the story. I think that when there are too many sex scenes it can distract from the plot and overall purpose of the story. I am not a fan of the nude picture because the details in the story should speak for themselves. The author words should create the mental pictures that allow you to imagine these scenes not pictures.

[BoyLazy]

I think that sex scenes should be used to enhance the story not as the main focus of the story. I think that when there are too many sex scenes it can distract from the plot and overall purpose of the story. I am not a fan of the nude picture because the details in the story should speak for themselves. The author words should create the mental pictures that allow you to imagine these scenes not pictures.

Great points..I too think that pictures can be avoided..

[Barbiedole]

It was a real distraction. But every intense book needs a distraction.

[Belynda White]

I wouldn't say so. It's okay for a book to have some distraction in the midst of all that intensity. That's my opinion though.

[bluegreenmarina]

It’s very rare that a male author accurately and sensitively captures female sexuality and from the sound of it, this book just goes overboard.

[BoyLazy]

I wouldn't say so. It's okay for a book to have some distraction in the midst of all that intensity. That's my opinion though.

Different opinion from the crowd.. many of us did not appreciate it..

[CommMayo]

Sex for the sake of sex is just a distraction. I'm of the opinion that all the sex was added in to distract the reader from the plot issues.

[ZeroChill]

I don't think it as you do, but in truth the book contained too many sex scenes that took the attention away from the main story.

[MarisaRose]

Yes - I think the focus on the erotic scenes took away from Jennifer's inner struggles and identity crisis. Those scenes didn't always seem to jive with the way the author initially portrayed her character. Many times, I questioned the author's intent behind those scenes.

[akeseh]

Though there are some scene's caution must be taken do minors don't read such books

[nadiadeana]

Yes, I wished that the book focused more on the plot, especially during the second half. Too much sexual scenes kinda makes it lose its appeal.

[ZeroChill]

Not typically sex hungry, but there are too many sex scenes that take the attention away from the main topic. Most have them have been explained in too much detail

[esthernn]

A monotony of sex scenes overshadows every sense of a good story.

[Dolor]

Hi,

I need some feedback for my first book that I am writing. Can you please have a look at one of the discussion forum topics and share your thoughts on it. I have a similar situation in my book and need your views on this topic. Even a short feedback would do on the below link

viewtopic.php?f=140&t=50992

Regards,
Boylazy

I have not read your review on this book so I can't answer your question right now.

If you had redirected me to the location of your review and told me to post my answer here, I could have followed the thread.

I had searched on Amazon but this book is no longer free.

My moon+ reader app library doesn't have this book.

If I could read your review, I will shoot my answer. ??

[BoyLazy]

Great.. take your time. Reply when you finally read this one ?