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Matt D Prinne wrote: ↑30 Nov 2017, 07:48 I loved the plot twist at the end and I think the story was always leading up to that as a big reveal.

lets hope the sequel has more adventures as it has so much potential.

Medha Jha wrote: ↑30 Nov 2017, 03:34 It was really boring twist.. after so long drag.

I agree it lacked creativity. It was pretty cliché.

Matt D Prinne wrote: ↑30 Nov 2017, 07:48 I loved the plot twist at the end and I think the story was always leading up to that as a big reveal.

It at least tied up some loose ends.

Christina Rose wrote: ↑30 Nov 2017, 15:13

Matt D Prinne wrote: ↑30 Nov 2017, 07:48 I loved the plot twist at the end and I think the story was always leading up to that as a big reveal.

It at least tied up some loose ends.

It was like a closure that was suggested by kids

This is fine that plot changed at the end, i liked the twist because it moved the path of the story and made it more interesting

I think the plot twists at the end was good. Yet, I do believe that the author could have found a less cliché way to tie up the loose ends.

I thought that the plot twist was a bit weird like it was just put in at the last moment. It felt out of place and it didn't really go well with the story.

I support the twist at the end because it changed the whole tone of the book and was quite exciting

You could see the twist coming and when it arrived I actually felt let down as I was hoping for something fresh!

I think if nothing else, the twist provides a way to continue a sequel and maintain some continuity with the original story.

I actually haven't read that many stories with the "twin" plotline, so this came as a surprise to me! Looking back though, there were definitely some signs that I missed. I do think there was a little problem with the flow of the story near the end, but I'm not sure the plot twist was fully to blame.

I myself am a fan of plot twists-- as long as it pertains and fits with the storyline. And not just something the author threw in because they seemed to run out of ideas.

I didn't enjoyed it.

The only good thing about the twist was that it injected some much needed plot into the story. I feel like the entire middle of the book is just a narration of Jennifer's boring, upper-class life where she goes to college and has lots of sex. With the twin, at least we see some more space travel.

Throughout the story, I was expecting some big development about the whole "past-Jennifer" thing. I do believe it could have been better executed, and that the way it was done responds to the author's need to give some credibility to said plot point. In fact, I expected more connections with the "future" to appear throughout the plot. I think it would have made the book much more interesting.