Has the story ended too sudden?
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Has the story ended too sudden?
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Hello Dear, you sounded like you're usually afraid of bad endings . But it is good to know that there is a second part to the story. Thanks for the information.Miriam Molina wrote:Now that we know there's at least a part two, we are appeased with the ending. Personally, I was happy with the ending, sequel or no sequel. Perhaps I'm too old and have gone through a lot in life, so I'm more accepting of "unfinished" stories.
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Yeah, this has been my very concern.Amagine wrote:I definitely think the ending was too hasty and quick. I heard there is going to be a sequel but book one should have ended a little better.
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I just hope the sequel give us a little resolution with some of the other issues though.Angela Stripes wrote:I felt a hint of resolve at the end of it, even with all the other issues still in growing conflict. it was a sort of rallying thing, but I agree it could have been a bit stronger or left off with a bit more direction for the sequel to pick up with.
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Great! Good to know you also share my view.gali wrote:I agree. I also thought the ending was too abrupt.
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Definitely so!Amagine wrote:I just hope the sequel give us a little resolution with some of the other issues though.Angela Stripes wrote:I felt a hint of resolve at the end of it, even with all the other issues still in growing conflict. it was a sort of rallying thing, but I agree it could have been a bit stronger or left off with a bit more direction for the sequel to pick up with.
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That could be the case. He wanted to end in suspense.jonaya wrote:well one would say the book has ended in tragedy,whereby every reader has to think of what happened next.the writer of this book did that deliberately to give more room for broading our minds
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Yeah, you guys may be right. It could also be his own way of beginning the second part of the book.Amagine wrote:That could be the case. He wanted to end in suspense.jonaya wrote:well one would say the book has ended in tragedy,whereby every reader has to think of what happened next.the writer of this book did that deliberately to give more room for broading our minds
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