I am vs. I'm

Discuss the June 2017 Book of the Month, Superhighway by Alex Fayman. Superhighway is the first book in the Superhighway Trilogy, so feel free to use this forum to discuss not only the first book but also the other books in the series.

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Re: I am vs. I'm

Post by kfwilson6 » 12 Mar 2018, 10:05

riazziea wrote:
29 Jul 2017, 15:06
I believe that it has to do with how the writer and narrorator are speaking. If the book is in first person and is more towards the conversational side of things, then I'm would seem appropriate. If it's more of a general telling or explanation I am seems to fit. Also when writing dialogue, I'm should be used because that is the normal vernacular and having someone say "I am" would sound strange. It really all depends on the context of the phrases.
Great explanation. I completely agree with this response. I can't say I noticed this issue but when I thought about the way I actually speak I would say "I'm". If you are writing formally, you should not use contractions at all such as in an academic paper. I agree that in the context of this novel, I'm probably was more fitting. I have read some very stilted dialogue and I didn't find it that off putting in this novel. It did sound a bit more formal than how a teenage boy would typically speak.

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Post by jamertin2963 » 18 Mar 2018, 09:23

This wasn't the only contraction that was mostly avoided in this book, and I think the lack of contractions made the dialogue clunky fairly frequently.

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Post by mamalui » 19 Mar 2018, 07:14

Since they both have the same meaning I didn't mind much. But I guess one sound casual and the other more official.
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Post by Misael » 03 Apr 2018, 06:43

I feel that the use of the former looks good when writing a letter and the latter is commonly used in oral communication.

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Post by BriennaiJ » 04 Apr 2018, 16:06

I'd have to agree. Formal writing would be for a formal paper. However, a book taking place entirely in the first person would simply not have the same amount of formality.

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Post by chupke07 » 21 Jun 2018, 06:43

I agree and even mentioned it in my review. Some of the conversational language used is too formal and is distracting because he is supposed to be a native English speaker from a city.

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Post by Storm+ » 27 Jun 2018, 18:35

If this was an academic paper or something, I would prefer the use of "I am" because it seems more professional. However, when a character is speaking in a story, regardless of whether it is to the reader or another character, I believe it's better to use the more conversational "I'm."

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Post by dbulkley » 03 Aug 2018, 11:43

I don't have a strong opinion about either and not sure hows it's annoying one or another...

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