Review by Rosemary Khathibe -- Final Report by Jeff Shear

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Review by Rosemary Khathibe -- Final Report by Jeff Shear

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[Following is a volunteer review of "Final Report" by Jeff Shear.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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Final Report by Jeff Shear centers around Jackson Guild's journey as a spy. It was written in the first person's perspective. The story started in 2010 when Guild was sent to Los Alamos to find out who bombed Washington. He spied on scientists like Sutton, Grant, Exner, Almont and Gomez. On his journey, Guild learned about the company that was a mastermind behind the building of a nuclear bomb, and how it got in the hands of the enemy. Later on, scientists he was using for information started dying one by one. It was only a matter of time before he discovered who murdered them.

The characters in the book were fully explored. I learned about each character's interesting background, their well-known tactics and contributions to the invention of a nuclear bomb. Therefore, it was easier to picture them in real life. For instance, Allie's life as a scientist and a gambler was detailed in a very satisfying manner. Unfortunately, this was the only thing I enjoyed about Final Report.

When I chose the book to review, it was categorised under C/T/M/H, and even the description explained it as a thriller. To my disappointment, when reading the book, I found it to be more of a historical fiction novel that occasionally uses science fiction techniques. It focused more on the creation of a fourth-generation nuclear weapon, wars and the missions Guild was involved in in the '90s. Again, the plot was predictable: there were no thrilling contents the book claimed to contain. It was more about the protagonist having conversations with people he was allocated to spy on.

There were also some French phrases that came up in the book without being translated: “Tiers du Cylindre" and "a Voisins du Zero". These two phrases were not the only ones, and I had to look up their meanings. Which was time-consuming and distracting. For these reasons, I rate Final Report 2 out of 4 stars. I'm not leaving it with 1 star because it seems to be professionally edited and proofread. Out of 129 pages in the book, I spotted only 6 grammatical errors and typos. For example, "It could a sign that he was in the position to sting me with an EpiPen". The author left 'be' before an 'a'. Like I said, there were few errors that did nothing to detract from the plot's significance.

Since thriller lovers will likely get disappointed, I recommend Final Report to people who love historical fiction and science fiction. If you want to know more about nuclear weapons and their uses in combat, this is the right book for you.

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A thorough and informative review of the book! Thanks for the heads up about the french phrases without translation, and focus on the nuclear weapons rather than a satisfying thriller story line. It would be interesting to know though, how come the protagonist's aides started getting killed off one by one.
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I hate it when there are words and phrases that distract from the flow of a good story. Overall though, the book and its characters are very interesting and well-developed. Thank you for a great review.
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Great review! I dislike predictable plots and would have preferred a thriller.Thanks for the thorough review.
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I'm not really into historical fiction, but the interesting plot and character development you talked about in this book makes me want to give it a try. Nice review.
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Fantastic review, though it is informative i don't understand that french
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A book for nuclear scientists?! That's a first! Its unfortunate there isn't much thrill in the book and the plot is predictable. Thanks for the insightful review!
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Sounds an interesting book with well developed characters and engaging storyline. You are right that should properly represent its genre. I like this book and will look for it. Thanks for this honest review.
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Thanks for the great review, unclear weapon topic is very interesting, It seems absurd that the government invest so much in weapons and war instead of bringing better life for all.
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It’s so disappointing when a book falls flat.
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Great review...it is always a shame when you find out that a book is not what you had expected.
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I'm sorry the book disappointed you. I find books with foreign words distracting and time-consuming too. Great review :)
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Thank you for the review! I also don't like books that has foreign phrases because I feel like I might be missing something important in their dialogue. It's a shame that the book was predictable though. That's my biggest annoyance when reading :(
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I think the book sounds OK, but the grammatical errors would drive me mad. So, I think it's best for me to pass on this one.

Love the way you have written the review. Keep them coming! :)
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Thank you for your honest yet well-founded review. It is good that you found noteworthy and likable about the piece, despite not meeting all your expectations.
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