Review of Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril

[Sarah Zain]

[Following is a volunteer review of "Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril" by John Frederick Zurn.]

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4 out of 5 stars

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I heard a saying and remembered it while reading Northland Chronicles—Mother World in Peril by John Frederick Zurn. I think it somehow reflects the plot: “You learn more from mistakes than from the successes. That's how discoveries are made!”

The story begins with Arjan, a 17-year-old teenager who decides to use his inheritance money to assemble an expedition group including the guide Radhana and five porters from the Daden Tribe —Inka, Louis, Lasan, Lokham, and Tanta— to discover the Northland ancient empire.

The purpose of the journey and our heroes' perspective on everything changed after meeting the Cosmic Being Baben and learning about the mysterious energy affecting the Northland and Mother World. A series of events began that put everyone to the test, especially with the appearance of the magical medallions.

A journey took them through the Florena Forest, into the Purple Desert, and to the Himnet Mountains, where the giant triclops Slobat joined the group until reaching Vasana and beyond. The storyline represents fantasy, progress, purity, an expected war, fallen Mystics, wicked Elders, secrets, abilities, and mystic ancestry, all set in a carefully constructed world.

Five parts and thirty-six chapters, during which the author managed to maintain my full attention, showing the conflicting feelings of the characters, ranging from selfishness, whether in assessing things or in judging others, to rebellion, and even dedication to the point of sacrifice. One of the characters I liked most was Radhana; the author created her actions and reactions to be natural, with fear and sadness; at the same time, she was quick to persevere and had deep faith.

The commendable cover is a great beginning. The writing style, with the chapters divided into subheadings, helped me connect the story's elements and understand the sequence of events. The author succeeded in enriching the storyline through developing supporting characters like Alana of the Telony clan or Arthur, the leader of the Yantrans, with the emergence of each magical event.

The story provided many themes, such as friendship, loyalty, remorse, betrayal, and trust. Even the sense of superiority was represented in the way Anahat and his followers treated Alana and the Telony. The plot explores the balance between nature and technology that aroused the struggle between good and evil. Do fear and the desire for power justify destruction? How can someone become aware of their mistakes? The plot blends thrill with enlightened values.

With the crises and problems that the expedition members faced, I felt that the author didn't want to make the story overwhelming; thus, the solutions appeared quick, maintaining the coherence of the story. For me, it made the events flow smoothly.

Despite my understanding of the historical projection represented in the journey and hardships, the author’s reference to the members of the expedition and the Northland inhabitants as pilgrims didn't fit with the story in my mind.

One point I consider negative, and it is the reason why I deduct a star, is the editing. I noticed many errors; although they appeared minor, the sheer numbers hindered my reading. Therefore, I rate the book 4 out of 5 stars.

Aside from that, the well-crafted plot and the multiple themes integrated wonderfully, along with the successive events, didn't make me feel bored. Without any bad words or complicated language, I consider the book a wonderful story suitable for a wide range of readers: fans of fantasy mixed with sci-fi as well as fans of magic and nature, which is also suitable for age groups starting from young teens.

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Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril
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[Chi Chiu Michael Mak]

[Following is a volunteer review of "Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril" by John Frederick Zurn.]

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4 out of 5 stars

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I heard a saying and remembered it while reading Northland Chronicles—Mother World in Peril by John Frederick Zurn. I think it somehow reflects the plot: “You learn more from mistakes than from the successes. That's how discoveries are made!”

The story begins with Arjan, a 17-year-old teenager who decides to use his inheritance money to assemble an expedition group including the guide Radhana and five porters from the Daden Tribe —Inka, Louis, Lasan, Lokham, and Tanta— to discover the Northland ancient empire.

The purpose of the journey and our heroes' perspective on everything changed after meeting the Cosmic Being Baben and learning about the mysterious energy affecting the Northland and Mother World. A series of events began that put everyone to the test, especially with the appearance of the magical medallions.

A journey took them through the Florena Forest, into the Purple Desert, and to the Himnet Mountains, where the giant triclops Slobat joined the group until reaching Vasana and beyond. The storyline represents fantasy, progress, purity, an expected war, fallen Mystics, wicked Elders, secrets, abilities, and mystic ancestry, all set in a carefully constructed world.

Five parts and thirty-six chapters, during which the author managed to maintain my full attention, showing the conflicting feelings of the characters, ranging from selfishness, whether in assessing things or in judging others, to rebellion, and even dedication to the point of sacrifice. One of the characters I liked most was Radhana; the author created her actions and reactions to be natural, with fear and sadness; at the same time, she was quick to persevere and had deep faith.

The commendable cover is a great beginning. The writing style, with the chapters divided into subheadings, helped me connect the story's elements and understand the sequence of events. The author succeeded in enriching the storyline through developing supporting characters like Alana of the Telony clan or Arthur, the leader of the Yantrans, with the emergence of each magical event.

The story provided many themes, such as friendship, loyalty, remorse, betrayal, and trust. Even the sense of superiority was represented in the way Anahat and his followers treated Alana and the Telony. The plot explores the balance between nature and technology that aroused the struggle between good and evil. Do fear and the desire for power justify destruction? How can someone become aware of their mistakes? The plot blends thrill with enlightened values.

With the crises and problems that the expedition members faced, I felt that the author didn't want to make the story overwhelming; thus, the solutions appeared quick, maintaining the coherence of the story. For me, it made the events flow smoothly.

Despite my understanding of the historical projection represented in the journey and hardships, the author’s reference to the members of the expedition and the Northland inhabitants as pilgrims didn't fit with the story in my mind.

One point I consider negative, and it is the reason why I deduct a star, is the editing. I noticed many errors; although they appeared minor, the sheer numbers hindered my reading. Therefore, I rate the book 4 out of 5 stars.

Aside from that, the well-crafted plot and the multiple themes integrated wonderfully, along with the successive events, didn't make me feel bored. Without any bad words or complicated language, I consider the book a wonderful story suitable for a wide range of readers: fans of fantasy mixed with sci-fi as well as fans of magic and nature, which is also suitable for age groups starting from young teens.

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Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril
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Why does the group set off to the Northland ancient empire? What drove each character? It makes me interested to know more about this fantastical pilgrimage!

[Gerry Steen]

From your review, I gather that world-building, character development, and a moving plot are strong points in this fantastic story. I do hope that the author passes this book through another round of editing so that it can elevate to 5-star status. Congratulations to John Frederick Zurn.for writing this great story that captivates the attention of the reader.

[Priya Murugesan]

This looks like a book for all ages and I could read it with my daughters! The plot is captivating and I will surely try this book if I get a chance. Thanks for your wonderful review!

[Sarah Zain]

[Following is a volunteer review of "Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril" by John Frederick Zurn.]

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4 out of 5 stars

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I heard a saying and remembered it while reading Northland Chronicles—Mother World in Peril by John Frederick Zurn. I think it somehow reflects the plot: “You learn more from mistakes than from the successes. That's how discoveries are made!”

The story begins with Arjan, a 17-year-old teenager who decides to use his inheritance money to assemble an expedition group including the guide Radhana and five porters from the Daden Tribe —Inka, Louis, Lasan, Lokham, and Tanta— to discover the Northland ancient empire.

The purpose of the journey and our heroes' perspective on everything changed after meeting the Cosmic Being Baben and learning about the mysterious energy affecting the Northland and Mother World. A series of events began that put everyone to the test, especially with the appearance of the magical medallions.

A journey took them through the Florena Forest, into the Purple Desert, and to the Himnet Mountains, where the giant triclops Slobat joined the group until reaching Vasana and beyond. The storyline represents fantasy, progress, purity, an expected war, fallen Mystics, wicked Elders, secrets, abilities, and mystic ancestry, all set in a carefully constructed world.

Five parts and thirty-six chapters, during which the author managed to maintain my full attention, showing the conflicting feelings of the characters, ranging from selfishness, whether in assessing things or in judging others, to rebellion, and even dedication to the point of sacrifice. One of the characters I liked most was Radhana; the author created her actions and reactions to be natural, with fear and sadness; at the same time, she was quick to persevere and had deep faith.

The commendable cover is a great beginning. The writing style, with the chapters divided into subheadings, helped me connect the story's elements and understand the sequence of events. The author succeeded in enriching the storyline through developing supporting characters like Alana of the Telony clan or Arthur, the leader of the Yantrans, with the emergence of each magical event.

The story provided many themes, such as friendship, loyalty, remorse, betrayal, and trust. Even the sense of superiority was represented in the way Anahat and his followers treated Alana and the Telony. The plot explores the balance between nature and technology that aroused the struggle between good and evil. Do fear and the desire for power justify destruction? How can someone become aware of their mistakes? The plot blends thrill with enlightened values.

With the crises and problems that the expedition members faced, I felt that the author didn't want to make the story overwhelming; thus, the solutions appeared quick, maintaining the coherence of the story. For me, it made the events flow smoothly.

Despite my understanding of the historical projection represented in the journey and hardships, the author’s reference to the members of the expedition and the Northland inhabitants as pilgrims didn't fit with the story in my mind.

One point I consider negative, and it is the reason why I deduct a star, is the editing. I noticed many errors; although they appeared minor, the sheer numbers hindered my reading. Therefore, I rate the book 4 out of 5 stars.

Aside from that, the well-crafted plot and the multiple themes integrated wonderfully, along with the successive events, didn't make me feel bored. Without any bad words or complicated language, I consider the book a wonderful story suitable for a wide range of readers: fans of fantasy mixed with sci-fi as well as fans of magic and nature, which is also suitable for age groups starting from young teens.

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Northland Chronicles Mother World in Peril
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon | on Smashwords

Why does the group set off to the Northland ancient empire? What drove each character? It makes me interested to know more about this fantastical pilgrimage!

Good, I am glad that the story intrigued you, I will wait for your opinion on the book when you have a chance to read it. Thank you

[Sarah Zain]

From your review, I gather that world-building, character development, and a moving plot are strong points in this fantastic story. I do hope that the author passes this book through another round of editing so that it can elevate to 5-star status. Congratulations to John Frederick Zurn.for writing this great story that captivates the attention of the reader.

Yeah Gerry, it has many good aspects expect of the errors and the rapid solutions. Overall, the book is enjoyable. The key word for me that I didn't feel bored. Thank you for your constant support.

[Sarah Zain]

This looks like a book for all ages and I could read it with my daughters! The plot is captivating and I will surely try this book if I get a chance. Thanks for your wonderful review!

Yes, it is indeed. After I finshed reviewing it, I began to tell the story to my daughter. Hope you get the chance to read it soon Priya. Thank you.

[Priya Murugesan]

This looks like a book for all ages and I could read it with my daughters! The plot is captivating and I will surely try this book if I get a chance. Thanks for your wonderful review!

Yes, it is indeed. After I finshed reviewing it, I began to tell the story to my daughter. Hope you get the chance to read it soon Priya. Thank you.

Waiting!

[Seetha E]

Carefully constructed world, well-developed characters, and a varied set of themes seem to have been addressed through this fiction book. Thank you for a thorough overview of the book, Sarah!

[Sarah Zain]

Carefully constructed world, well-developed characters, and a varied set of themes seem to have been addressed through this fiction book. Thank you for a thorough overview of the book, Sarah!

Hope you will enjoy the story when you have the chance to read it.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment Seetha.

[Julie Marie Basil]

I agree with the sentiment that we often learn more from our mistakes than our successes and that leaves me interested in this story. I hope that this book goes through another round of editing to improve its readability.

[Omneya Shakeep]

I finished the book recently and I have to say, you nailed it with your review. I think you pretty much covered all aspects of the book. Although I thought its main target was young teens because the author kept explaining every detail. I don't know if you noticed this.

[Sarah Zain]

I finished the book recently and I have to say, you nailed it with your review. I think you pretty much covered all aspects of the book. Although I thought its main target was young teens because the author kept explaining every detail. I don't know if you noticed this.

Great, I will wait for your review to know your opinion.
Yes, I thought so too. But since I enjoyed the story, even though I'm known not to like excessive explanation, I believe it was suitable for everyone. I really like stories that make me want to share them.
Thank you Omneya.

[Anu Anand]

Mistakes really do teach us more. I’m curious to see how that idea plays out in the story. The magical medallions, fallen Mystics, and the nature-tech balance sound intriguing. Radhana also seems like a strong, compelling character. Thanks for this great review!

[Sarah Zain]

Mistakes really do teach us more. I’m curious to see how that idea plays out in the story. The magical medallions, fallen Mystics, and the nature-tech balance sound intriguing. Radhana also seems like a strong, compelling character. Thanks for this great review!

Radhana is a good and responsible person in all her details. I hope you read the book soon and like it. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts Anu .