Review of Mrs. Ashley's First BBC
Posted: 03 Mar 2025, 07:14
[Following is a volunteer review of "Mrs. Ashley's First BBC" by Mr and Mrs BCFlyers2016.]
In Mrs. Ashley’s First BBC, the author takes us through the journey of Ashley and Erick who have been married for 26 years and the adventures of their open marriage. Although the couple have been meaning to go for a BBC (Big Black Cock) ,Ashley is seen still contemplating on whether to go for it or not as questions like “will she come to like the BBC more than his own husbands’ Cock? Will this Change their marriage for the better or worse?” Kept worrying her. After being convinced and encouraged by Erick, Ashley decides to have an experience with the BBC and as expected, she comes to like the experience and wants to do it again.
The author also talks about Amber, Ashley’s best friend , who is married to a pastor and whom Ashley always tells everything in detail that goes through their open marriage with Erick, including all the snaky stuff she does with him and their sexual explorations. This apparently triggers and interests Amber and she confesses this to Ashley telling her that she would be interested in exploring something with them .. what would be their reaction?
I have rated this book a one out of four because several things make this book a difficult read. First, the editing of this book was poor with several easily noticeable errors. Generally the book lacked a polished writing.
The book also contained a lot of grammatical errors and typos which made it difficult to get what the author was trying to convey. e.g., there was a point instead of typing “what made you bring it up?” The author would type “what brought it up?
In most Chapters of this book, the author used a dialogue – like style to quote the conversations between the characters such that if this paragraph is what Ashley said then the next paragraph would be what Erick said and vice versa, this made the book a difficult read because at some points, if one is not keen enough, then one can’t actually tell if a sentence was said by Erick or Ashley.
Lastly, the storyline of this book was easily predictable. It wasn’t one which could make a reader to be curious of what would happen next and also I feel like this book did not have a proper ending. It was as if the storyline was somehow cut short.
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Mrs. Ashley's First BBC
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In Mrs. Ashley’s First BBC, the author takes us through the journey of Ashley and Erick who have been married for 26 years and the adventures of their open marriage. Although the couple have been meaning to go for a BBC (Big Black Cock) ,Ashley is seen still contemplating on whether to go for it or not as questions like “will she come to like the BBC more than his own husbands’ Cock? Will this Change their marriage for the better or worse?” Kept worrying her. After being convinced and encouraged by Erick, Ashley decides to have an experience with the BBC and as expected, she comes to like the experience and wants to do it again.
The author also talks about Amber, Ashley’s best friend , who is married to a pastor and whom Ashley always tells everything in detail that goes through their open marriage with Erick, including all the snaky stuff she does with him and their sexual explorations. This apparently triggers and interests Amber and she confesses this to Ashley telling her that she would be interested in exploring something with them .. what would be their reaction?
I have rated this book a one out of four because several things make this book a difficult read. First, the editing of this book was poor with several easily noticeable errors. Generally the book lacked a polished writing.
The book also contained a lot of grammatical errors and typos which made it difficult to get what the author was trying to convey. e.g., there was a point instead of typing “what made you bring it up?” The author would type “what brought it up?
In most Chapters of this book, the author used a dialogue – like style to quote the conversations between the characters such that if this paragraph is what Ashley said then the next paragraph would be what Erick said and vice versa, this made the book a difficult read because at some points, if one is not keen enough, then one can’t actually tell if a sentence was said by Erick or Ashley.
Lastly, the storyline of this book was easily predictable. It wasn’t one which could make a reader to be curious of what would happen next and also I feel like this book did not have a proper ending. It was as if the storyline was somehow cut short.
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Mrs. Ashley's First BBC
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon