Review by DustinPBrown -- My Trip To Adele

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Review by DustinPBrown -- My Trip To Adele

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[Following is a volunteer review of "My Trip To Adele" by R.I.Alyaseer and A. I Alyaseer.]
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I was pretty surprised to see the title and cover art for this book when I picked it up. A book about Adele, literally titled My Trip to Adele? And it’s a romance? We’ll see how schmultzy this gets, I thought to myself.

The novel follows three characters on their own personal stories.

Elias, has returned to his hometown of Marrakech in search of a lost love he shared an amazing week with 8 years ago. He searches the ancient city for her, gathering clues from old acquaintances and even dabbling in magic to try and find her.

Yaser’s story is less romantic, but more real. His 8-year marriage is becoming a bore to him, his wife a nuisance, and their counselor doesn’t seem to be helping. His struggles are much more internal, but they take him through the streets of Las Vegas as he searches for the meaning he craves.

Last there’s Nadia, a Jordanian woman whose biggest dream is to take her son to see Adele live. She runs into obstacles in the form of her abusive ex-husband, her unsympathetic corporate bosses, and a patriarchal society that limits even the strongest of women.

I think the most fascinating aspect of this book to me is the different takes on love and the different forms of it that exist. What I expected was a run-of-the-mill romance either beginning or culminating with the Adele concert. Instead I saw a marriage try to respark a fizzling, passionate love and how grand romantic gestures don’t mean as much as honest, open communication in repairing a relationship. I saw a mother’s ardent love for her child expressed in soft, real moments like singing a song together. In essence, I saw a reflection of reality, and it made the book so much stronger.

This book isn’t just a romance though. The characters grow in surprising and satisfying ways. The story is paced well, and no scene feels useless or unearned. Anyone who likes reading about other cultures or countries will definitely enjoy this too, as I did. I didn’t know, for example, that dowries were still a thing in some cultures, or what a dowry could mean to the bride, the groom, and the entire family involved in the marriage. The descriptions of El-Fnaa Square in Marrakech were vivid and the legal peculiarities of Jordan and its tribe system was very interesting.

I have few complaints about the book, really. A couple of typos or mistranslations pop up every now and then. It takes a while for the story and characters to find their voices, but when they do, they’re compelling and well-done. The authors also have a soft spot for exclamation points that irked me just a tad.

As for the conceit of Adele throughout the book, at times it felt over the top. There are moments that feel like an advertisement for the singer and her new album. I enjoyed that the chapters are named after Adele songs and that the lyrics are always pertinent to the chapter, but the execution was off. The characters always either listen to the song or sing it. Setting the lyrics up at the beginning of the chapter as epigraphs would have avoided this awkward problem and avoided the gimmicky, forced feel that the inclusion of the lyrics sometimes had.

As I said though, these are minor issues. I very much recommend My Trip to Adele and give it 4 out of 4 stars because the characters and the story in this book are more than enough to compel the reader to the end, an ending I didn’t expect and that had minimal schmultz and cheese.

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This is not my kind of book.. I am not interested in this topic
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I gave this book 4 stars too! I quite enjoyed reading about other cultures, their descriptions were well written! Nice review.
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I was amazed with this book. Yes, the story is unique. Yes, the writing is evocative. Yes, the characters are realistic and likable. But to do all that in fan art is to me exceptional. Too bad Adele's handlers squashed it. I still hope Adele can behold this masterpiece from two talented die-hard fans. If I were her, I'd be more than honored.
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I really like how you describe the book as showing the different ways that people can experience love. The descriptions of other countries and cultures were excellent. Great review. Thanks.
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I'm reading this book currently. I'm enjoying it really. Although, I agree that the book seems to advertise Adele. Lol
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Thank you for your succinct, frank, and witty review. I've read, reviewed, and loved this book, too, foremostly because I'm an Adele fan, and most especially because it just didn't disappoint me at all.
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When I have the opportunity to read this book, I really enjoyed. The three stories are wonderful and well developed. Thanks for your review!
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I am glad to know this book is with minimal schmultz. Indeed there are other forms of love; not necessarily romance. Thanks for this descriptive review.
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I have read a few reviews on this book, but I absolutely loved to read your take on it. Good point mentioning that this was more than a mere romance story. Thanks for the review!
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I think the most fascinating aspect of this book to me is the different takes on love and the different forms of it that exist. What I expected was a run-of-the-mill romance either beginning or culminating with the Adele concert. Instead I saw a marriage try to respark a fizzling, passionate love and how grand romantic gestures don’t mean as much as honest, open communication in repairing a relationship. I saw a mother’s ardent love for her child expressed in soft, real moments like singing a song together. In essence, I saw a reflection of reality, and it made the book so much stronger.
What an interesting insight! Of course, love has many forms and all of them are meaningful. Your reflection on marriage is incredibly accurate, in my experience. I agree, books that really reflect reality can be very powerful.
As for the conceit of Adele throughout the book, at times it felt over the top. There are moments that feel like an advertisement for the singer and her new album. I enjoyed that the chapters are named after Adele songs and that the lyrics are always pertinent to the chapter, but the execution was off. The characters always either listen to the song or sing it. Setting the lyrics up at the beginning of the chapter as epigraphs would have avoided this awkward problem and avoided the gimmicky, forced feel that the inclusion of the lyrics sometimes had.
I had read several reviews on this book and nobody had mentioned it, but I understand your point. Subtlety can be an important quality.

Amazingly insightful and honest review. Thanks!
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I liked your view of the book, as you mentioned that the characters revealed different takes and forms of love and that you learned a bit about other countries and cultures.
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This seems to be a great collection of short stories with an underlying connection to music.

Thank you for the great review.
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I liked this book very much because it shows the importance of relationships. It's not important that always love means between a couple it can be in between anyone. And this book is the best example of love between parents and children's. This book is just heart touching.
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I like your perspective of the book,and the way you capture the realistic situations faced by the characters. Quite an insightful review. Thanks!
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