Review by Ayosinmi -- My Trip to Adele

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Review by Ayosinmi -- My Trip to Adele

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[Following is a volunteer review of "My Trip to Adele" by A.I.Alyaseer, R.I.Alyaseer.]
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My Trip To Adele by R.I Alyaseer and A.I Alyaseer. 220 Standard Pages.

This is a fictional story about three different people who share a common love for Adele and who have a relentless desire of seeing her perform live at Verona.

Nadia is a divorcee and a single mom who through courage made the decision to divorce her husband and in spite of all resistance, stood by her decision, and held firm to her freedom. One of her greatest ambitions is to take Waleed, her only son to see Adele perform live.
Yaser is an oncologist and a surgeon who is also an atheist but got married to his wife because of her faith. However, he started feeling confined in his marriage and hopes to keep his marriage afloat by taking his wife to the Adele concert in Verona.
Elias who fell in love with Malika and left her for several reasons but could not just let her go in his heart. Elias left Rome to go back to Morroco and find closure as regards Malika, he later realized that his love for Adele which he shared with her years before might be the only thing that will bring them together again.

These three protagonists, although they lived in different worlds were bound together by a single mission to see Adele perform live in Verona, but will their love for Adele be strong enough to overcome their personal challenges and obstacles that await them on their mission to Verona?

The story was well written and I love the places where they were set in. The authors were able to give a vivid description of the three major cities mentioned in the book, Las Vegas, Marrakesh and Amman. Even though I have never been to those cities, I definitely have an idea of what to expect. The book contains a lot of meaningful, relevant and realistic philosophical quotes. It did not only tell a story, it also taught some good values about human freedom and Independence. I especially identify with the character of Nadia. Her stubborn and relentless streak to stay truly independent, not bowing to any pressure especially when it challenged what she believed in. She said and I quote "... because my freedom deserves to be fought for, regardless of many obstacles I would have to face as a result "

I have some misgivings about the book though, the constant reference to Adele's lyrics and songs almost overshadowed the essence of the story. The use of the lyrics was overdone in my opinion despite the fact that I am her fan. The transition between the past and present when Elias was reflecting on his relationship with Malika was not smoothly done and it sometimes got confusing. I also found a typographical error and a grammatical error on the pages of the book.

My Trip to Adele is therefore rated 3 out of 4 stars by me for the above reasons, also because it is not perfectly presented. It could have been rated higher because the story is perfect but the book is flawed.

This is a book that seeks to encourage women in abusive relationships to stand up for themselves and say NO MORE to their abusers.
Adele's fans will definitely love the book. It will appeal to the young and the young at heart who love life and adventure, also people who are resisting abuse and those who have fought and won the battle against emotional tyranny.

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I agree with you about the overuse of lyrics and the unsmooth transition between times. I didn't think it was that well-translated, though, due to some errors and awkwardly worded sentences. I am glad that you enjoyed the book despite its flaws. Nice review!
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I love books which transport you to new destinations. As an Adele fan, I have to read this!
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I have heard so much about this novel . Nice review .
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Nice review. I couldn't stand the numerous Adele renditions throughout the book. Still, I guess the authors' goal was achieved in letting us have an Adele experience.
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gali wrote:I agree with you about the overuse of lyrics and the unsmooth transition between times. I didn't think it was that well-translated, though, due to some errors and awkwardly worded sentences. I am glad that you enjoyed the book despite its flaws. Nice review!
Thanks dear. Right. It shows that the translators aren't native English speakers. There's a disconnect kind of. But overall, it's a good read.
Thanks for your comment. Cheers

-- 20 Jul 2017, 12:49 --
Kelebogile Mbangi wrote:I love books which transport you to new destinations. As an Adele fan, I have to read this!
It's definitely worth reading. Especially since you are an Adele fan.
Cheers dear

-- 20 Jul 2017, 12:50 --
Darakhshan Nazir wrote:I have heard so much about this novel . Nice review .
Thanks a lot. I appreciate the comment

-- 21 Jul 2017, 01:09 --
juliusotinyo wrote:Nice review. I couldn't stand the numerous Adele renditions throughout the book. Still, I guess the authors' goal was achieved in letting us have an Adele experience.
The funny thing is that I'm her fan but I got an overdose of her lyrics such that I have not gone near her song since then. ?
Just that the story itself, well compensated for it.

-- 21 Jul 2017, 01:11 --
Darakhshan Nazir wrote:I have heard so much about this novel . Nice review .
It's one of the books of the month, that's probably why you have heard a lot about it.
You will definitely enjoy reading it
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I have read reviews on this book but have not yet read it. Sounds like a nice read and it's a shame the author overused the lyrics. Good to know you enjoyed reading it. Nice and honest review.
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Thanks a lot for your opinion and nice comment. I hope you eventually get to read it so that we can compare notes. Cheers
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I will definitely read it.
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Great Sis. Please do. Cheers
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Your review is very genuine and well written. I really like it.

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Your review is very genuine and well written. I really like it.
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Thank you very much. I hope you will read the book too, so that we can compare notes.
Cheers!

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@kelebogile Mbagi, I hope you have obtained your copy of "a trip to Adele", it's worth a shot. Meanwhile, I just need this page to be active again. I need you all, my friends, to comment and keep it alive again. Cheers!
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Post by Manang Muyang »

I have just read the book myself and have to agree that the story is something else! It's wonderfully different. What makes it more amazing is how Adele's songs neatly fit into the chapters. There might be some overkill, but hey, Adele inspired the book!

There were some grammatical lapses and confusing sentences but these were few and did not impact on my enjoyment of the story.

Insightful review, Ayosinmi. Cheers!
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Miriam! You have just made my day.
You are right about the overkill. ? but once again, it didn't diminish the humor and lesson of the book.
It was quite creative of the authors actually, to have been able to match the lyrics with the storyline that way.
I love the story. I'm glad you do too.
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Yeah, I love romantic stories. But what intrigued most about the book is its sentimental approach to female subjugation. All the same, thanks for the awesome review.
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