Thank you for your time and comment! I apologize that it has taken so long to respond, I haven't been feeling well. I will of course return the favor like I always do.Espie wrote: ↑21 Nov 2018, 22:50 We could be viewed as villains or heroes in someone else's life, depending on what or whose viewpoint would be used. That "we cannot please everyone" has not turned into an often-uttered cliche for nothing, for one. Not all observations you've mentioned were glaringly wrong, but I'd understand if there were more and enough of them to distract you. I am also one with you in hoping that the author should have had better editing at his side on this piece enough to meet your standards. Thank you for your honest review.
Yes, there were many more errors and I can't begin to tell you how confusing the first 200 pages were- tons of characters, worlds, time periods and flipping back and forth - sometimes twice on one page. But, the last 100+ pages were good, so I know the author (and this book) has a lot of potential. Shame about the errors though- you think the author would have taken the time to read it once through since he had stated it took 21 years to write!