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Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

The deadline for the second contest has already passed and the stories are available for reading. It had a Spring theme, and the winner got a $25 gift certificate. Stay tuned for information regarding another contest!
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Re: Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

Post Number:#46 by pallavi garg
» 15 Feb 2016, 07:34

At last death might set him free to fly like a robin...such a sudden twist to the story...beautiful. ..loved every word...brilliantly created. .
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Re: Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

Post Number:#47 by Cold_Case
» 17 Feb 2016, 23:52

i was not prepared for that ending!
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Post Number:#48 by Book Unicorn
» 08 Apr 2016, 04:36

Don't really like the last bit, but the rest of the story was beautifully written and wonderfully descriptive.
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Re: Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

Post Number:#49 by Christine Benedict
» 08 Apr 2016, 12:17

Very nice. Every professor says to trust the reader. I think your ending is great!
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Re: Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

Post Number:#50 by Vermont Reviews
» 12 May 2016, 09:55

Excellent writing. Keep up the good work.

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Post Number:#51 by ellehiltunen
» 03 Jun 2016, 04:01

I love how we go through Billy's head and feel his emotions like they are our own! Wonderful story!
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Post Number:#52 by klbradley
» 22 Jul 2016, 08:02

Very creative story! Well done!
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» 20 Jun 2017, 17:33

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Re: Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

Post Number:#54 by Vivian Paschal
» 28 Jun 2017, 13:22

This is really captivating and creative. I didn't quite understand the end but I liked the twist anyway. I think it has to do with painting the present to resemble the past that one is used to. But of course, like most writings, it is open to several interpretations. Nice work though; just a bit difficult to understand.
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Re: Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

Post Number:#55 by Winnie1219
» 08 Jul 2017, 19:26

very nice short story .it is full of knowledge. so creative.
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Post Number:#56 by violet-trey19
» 30 Jul 2017, 01:40

Good story!
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