Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shaphat

The deadline for the second contest has already passed and the stories are available for reading. It had a Spring theme, and the winner got a $25 gift certificate. Stay tuned for information regarding another contest!
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1 star - poor, bad
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8%
2 stars - fair, okay
16
33%
3 stars - good, recommend it
16
33%
4 stars - amazing, excellent
12
25%
 
Total votes: 48

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Re: Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shapha

Post by liquidprinter » 23 Jul 2013, 06:55

NO doubt!
Great...

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Post by aero monkey » 29 Jul 2013, 16:30

Well done to the person who wrote that story. Really was incredible and moving.

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Post by Premm » 19 Aug 2013, 02:30

Amazing story, nicely written. The main thing I loved is the author has covered everything in such a short story.. must read it once..

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Post by Zannie » 07 Sep 2013, 19:05

Wow a deserving winner.

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Post by Eve-Hanlon » 14 Sep 2013, 17:02

Fantastic story. I was hooked right in there. Really well done.

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Post by Misaela » 19 Sep 2013, 16:27

I enjoyed it very much, but it needs proofing for grammar.

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Post by Cecil » 04 Dec 2013, 21:59

Great story

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Post by Michalec » 07 Dec 2013, 03:15

Although the story is very short, but I love it. You can put your writing so gathered into a book of short stories, will lean welcome, at least for me.

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Post by lemming » 12 Dec 2013, 02:44

Frightening

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Post by Jsalgado97 » 26 Dec 2013, 16:12

I was blown away by this story.. Moral: You never know who is listening!

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Post by leseluv » 02 Jan 2014, 19:57

Wow.

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Post by Sokfa » 03 Jan 2014, 06:17

Lovely story, I really enjoyed reading it

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Post by carrn_boys » 21 Jan 2014, 09:10

Wow! Fantastic job. Very impressive!

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Post by neha+thomas+ » 13 Feb 2014, 21:17

A very mind-clenching story I didn't want it to end. Well written and the characters are well scripted.

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Post by Dana0483 » 26 Feb 2014, 19:38

Wow! That is a very good and surprising story. It is one that kept me wondering what would happen next.

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