Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shaphat

The deadline for the second contest has already passed and the stories are available for reading. It had a Spring theme, and the winner got a $25 gift certificate. Stay tuned for information regarding another contest!
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How do you rate this story?

1 star - poor, bad
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8%
2 stars - fair, okay
18
24%
3 stars - good, recommend it
28
38%
4 stars - amazing, excellent
22
30%
 
Total votes: 74

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Re: Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shapha

Post by Selena Marie price »

i like the story

-- 20 Apr 2017, 10:04 --

i like the story
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Post by andy g »

wow..that story gave me chills, really enjoyed it.
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Post by Tomiwa »

lesson fro this story,mind what u say cause u dont know who is listening.walls have hears they say.the story is some how scary too.
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I love all stories that touch on the unknown.
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Post by Belynda White »

Awesome story!? I totally loved it.
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Post by NICA ALBERT RANCES »

I little bit scary and interesting story. And Im sorry but form the very start I already knew btesy mother will going to diee..
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Post by Felecia Jude »

Trilling with sad ending. Have fun reading
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Congrats
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Post by Jadenchristine »

Very good creative writing with a great imagination!
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Post by Paul78 »

A good story with lessons to learn. Do not wish somebody evil as it may come back to you as well.
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Post by uyky »

It was a good story, but I was expecting a twist. The ending was expected and it was quite cliche. But still very nicely written.
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Post by Suave »

Good story
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Post by Jobeezah »

It's a nice story
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Post by Enabor21885 »

Good story :D
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Post by Joules just b »

the story is good and i think it will be better to have this in the small screen
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