A Letter with Love.

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A Letter with Love.

Post by sszb » 08 Nov 2018, 06:56

Hi there,

Remember me ??

I don't think so that you have me in your mind.

I still remember the day you met me, you hold me, touched me, hugged me with such delight that I fell in love with you in seconds.

You took me to your room, looked at me with love. I was ready to amaze you with everything I have but than you just kept me as a decoration item.
Everyday you were with new fellows, whereas I was still there where you left me.

I am writing this letter just to remind you I still hold everything that will drag you to outside of this world, you will forget your worries with me, just try me for ONCE, PLEASE..

Yours and only yours

Book Unread
From the top shelf.
‏We’re all stories in the end. Just make it a good one.”

‏ Middleton, Jacquelyn.

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Post by Manka1 » 01 Dec 2018, 12:29

I think such a letter could only write either a teen or a person , that does not know what self respect is. However for a teen this is still fine , but for an adult that doesn't respect himself/herseif it is not. If a person leaves you , you must sta away from him/her but never to ask the person to return .Who really loves and needs you , will never leave you alone

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Post by bambara amani » 29 Apr 2019, 05:40

i think this letters is very emotionally,so when you are in relationship with someone you want to care about her,to keep her in small paradise ( to make felling happy ) ,to respect her , to be worried when you has loosed her ,in this case you need to collaborate, to discuss about love and your future plan in life .

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Post by sszb » 29 Apr 2019, 08:36

Its from the BOOK UNREAD. Not some person.
‏We’re all stories in the end. Just make it a good one.”

‏ Middleton, Jacquelyn.

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Post by Treeswife-20 » 30 May 2019, 22:37

We are all made of chapter's, each one different and unique

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Post by Freelance1 » 21 Jul 2019, 22:09

Cute play with words to insinuate a relationship between humans. When in reality it is about book.

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Post by lisa conway » 07 Aug 2019, 00:01

I think this is a person who is in love with the other person. But yet patience in waiting on the person to love them.

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Post by Moodykelz_10 » 24 Aug 2019, 12:15

I thought this was quite smart this letter. It was sweet and a play on words, portraying a love letter between a couple when instead a book gathering dust just waiting to be read.

I enjoyed it.

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Post by Rachaem5612 » 26 Dec 2019, 11:14

I think whoever’s writing this letter is really in love with who it is supposed to be going to. He did really good explaining how he still had her on he’s mind.

Loved it.

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Post by Kenzie_121 » 08 Jan 2020, 21:19

I feel that whoever wrote this beautiful poem was in love with some guy who didn’t really love them. It’s a very soft spoken and great proem.

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Post by Brianna Thornton » 12 Jan 2020, 14:01

This letter is really good. But the author doesn't really explain about this other person. Its just ok I fell in love with this boy in seconds and he left me. Like I kinda feel like there was only a hook to it. Nothing to back it up

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Post by Emi Waseimoala » 22 Jan 2020, 05:56

I can relate to this letter. It is from an unread book, that the reader was interested in at the first glance, probably planning to read it but never get a chance to. It is how we bookworms sometimes would get lost in choosing or buying so many books and forget to read the particular one you saw first. Procrastinating and never really getting to read that book. It makes me want to go through my bookshelves and read all the books!!!
"So many books, so little time"- Frank Zappa

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