Is this any good?
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Is this any good?
I love him so much, but he’s never there,
I give him my all, but he doesn’t care.
We live in our house, but it doesn’t feel like home,
My hearts breaking inside, I feel so alone.
Tomorrow will be better; I promise I’ll change,
But nothing ever does, it’s always the same.
I can’t stand this anymore; something’s got to give,
We can’t stay like this; it is no way to live.
I try to leave, but he begs me to stay,
I know that I shouldn’t, but I can’t walk away.
I love him you see, and I always will,
Two hearts bound together, in a life with no thrill.
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But it shows an eternal condition of woman's heart and soul, so I can't see anything original here. Anyway poetry is good and touching.
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It was lacking somewhere, but I cant really put my finger on it.
Id give it a 4/5.
Id be more specific, ill have to read it a couple more times.
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