My advice, for what it's worth, would be not to add those two lines.
The Do you want to go out with me
strikes me as a question she is going to have to treat seriously whereas the 'do you just think I am lame' she might take as a bit flippant & react equally flippantly.
Thanks for your advice? I really like the "do you feel the same" line, because thats almost confronting, so what do you think I should have to rhyme with same? I've tried all i can think of but none of them work. maybe i could say "do you feel the same way?"
UPDATE: I changed it to
I want to be with you every day.
Please tell me if you feel that way.
I sent it through and she said no.
She did say she loves me but theres another guy.
Oh well, you win some, you lose some.