From a wandering heart

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Abigail09
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From a wandering heart

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I really want to know
I really need to know
How to fit in
How else to satisfy them
I try to be funny
I try to be interesting
I try to be creative
I try everything
Just in the name of fitting in
I wonder if they how know tough it is
I wonder if they know how painful it is
When after all my efforts ...
I wonder if they for once
Considered my feelings
My heart keeps wandering
Thinking
Contemplating
If people are really this way
If they can actually be this negligent..
I keep quiet I endure
I try I smile more
But ,just for once I wonder if they ever thought of me....
Just what does it take to get real friends?
Just what .....






From a Wandering Heart (True)
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You have really that thought arranged well into a poem form..I can feel your emotions here..
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Abigail09
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Thank You
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