Warm hand equal cold heart. cold hand equals warm heart?

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Warm hand equal cold heart. cold hand equals warm heart?

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day to day I shake hands
each day each hand belong to a warm person or a cold person.
does a cold hand equal a warm hearted person that is sweet
does a warm hand equal a cold and disdainful hearted person
day to day I meet and shake hand with new people
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Hello Amcdanel86,

I assume that this is your original work? You did not say that it was written by someone else, so I take it that this is your own creation.

Regardless, it is very beautiful. I feel like there are a few different meanings that people can take from this poem, and that is something that I enjoy from a poem. To me, it seems like the implication written is that the exterior of people does not always match the interior, in that despite someone seeming to be nice and kind, they are really mean and cruel. Alike, a person who may seem mean and cruel is actually nice and kind. That is simply my interpretation of it though. I am sure it has countless meanings to others. I find it compelling to read poems like this and ponder the message. Often times they can make you think about people in new ways, and sometimes it's not always positive. Nevertheless, it opens ones eyes, and that alone can be positive.

Keep writing my friend, this was very nice to read.

P.S. Be sure to watch out for the spelling and grammar. There are a couple of little hiccups in there. :tiphat:
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The Ellipsis Writer wrote:Hello Amcdanel86,

I assume that this is your original work? You did not say that it was written by someone else, so I take it that this is your own creation.

Regardless, it is very beautiful. I feel like there are a few different meanings that people can take from this poem, and that is something that I enjoy from a poem. To me, it seems like the implication written is that the exterior of people does not always match the interior, in that despite someone seeming to be nice and kind, they are really mean and cruel. Alike, a person who may seem mean and cruel is actually nice and kind. That is simply my interpretation of it though. I am sure it has countless meanings to others. I find it compelling to read poems like this and ponder the message. Often times they can make you think about people in new ways, and sometimes it's not always positive. Nevertheless, it opens ones eyes, and that alone can be positive.

Keep writing my friend, this was very nice to read.

P.S. Be sure to watch out for the spelling and grammar. There are a couple of little hiccups in there. :tiphat:
Thank you for your input. :tiphat: I am working on grammer and spelling as I write. :techie-reference: I don't always catch them all. You actually got what I was trying to convey. Hope you have a great weekend :D
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