POEM: The Beautiful Garden

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POEM: The Beautiful Garden

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1

i trample carelessly
through the beautiful garden
of your eyes
disturbing
the flower beds
of innocence

2

the roses that i ripped
from their fragile stems
the fragrant petals
that i crushed
float down
your mahogany cheeks
and touch the lips
that kissed me
ignorant
of the wreckage
i would leave
in my path

3

i turned the thorns
of your longing
inwards
so they would
pierce
your soft decomposing
core
when i entered
unannounced

4

i poured the acid
of my lust
upon the throbbing soil
of your desire
and all the flowers died
in the beautiful garden
of your eyes
and slowly
turned to dust
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Post by rssllue »

Wow! Quite the picture you paint with your writing!
~ occupare fati suffocavit

I will both lay me down in peace, and sleep: for Thou, LORD, only makest me dwell in safety. ~ Psalms 4:8
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Post by Carlton Carr »

Hello rssllue. Thank you for reading and responding, it's very encouraging.
Let others live in black and white; you must live in Technicolor...make your reader see the blood at the heart of the ruby. Rita Mae Brown
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