Love at First Sight

[FNAWrite]

Love at First Sight

Fishnet thighs rise
from flare-top boots
that stop just short of a promise.
She wears
black leather
scorched with chrome zippers.
Miniskirt and
joyfully inadequate vest.
Words yet unspoken
yet lips unsilent -
louder than red paint.
A siren song of a mouth
beckoning to me
"Come."

[ladlasheikh]

this is good one...



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[johnniewalk]

Hmm Looks like you become a romantic person on that time..

[darlawonders21]

I like that dating site that says love doesn't come first like comes first...I truly believe you have to like someone before you love them... There is also a difference between lust and love most people now a days get them confused... Sometimes you just know how you feel about a person after spending time with them, but saying "I love you" should be said when relationship has built to that level. Jumping into something like love can have consequences...

[johappy]

Love at first sight
This is nice. Perfect descriptions. Great gob.

[marcjohann30]

Eagerness on possessing it

[imSunshine]

Sounds like a teenage love to me from a young mind that felt that her heart is already that old

[Amara Bright]

Love at first sight. This description sounds sweet.
Sometimes you just know how you feel about a person after spending time with them, but saying "I love you" should be said when relationship has built to that level.

[emidio125]

Great one

[Nina Vanderbilt]

Beautiful poem. Love at first sight is possible. It happened to me once. And it lasted for a long time. But this love that I have now... This is the precious one.