Missing u

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ishu_shami
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Missing u

Post by ishu_shami »

when clouds run fast,
when the day was end,
my heart beats a lot,
because i miss u....
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Post by elicia7887 »

Simply sweet. Nice.
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Post by roosttylor »

Such a shared thought.
Well-penned!



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Post by fugenxuae »

Well said..
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Post by Abigail09 »

lovely
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Very nice!
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Post by johappy »

Straight to the point. XD I love how simple and accurate this is.
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