My Sickness

[laci_baby]

I'm darkness denying the light
Beaten and broken each night,
Tossing and tortured til dawn
Of visions of you though your gone.
I'm ripped apart outside in
Kept in the thoughts of our sins,
Screaming through nights that wont end
Nights that are marked on my skin.
Each night rips through my soul
So why cant i just let you go?
Your nothing thats good or right
Your heartless and cruel, but your mine.
In this life your all that i choose
I survive on the memory of you
Your the place that i found home
So how could you just up and go?
All that i fears what i want
A sickness that begs you to haunt
I will never disappear, i swear
For forever, i'll be right here.
The more i fight, the less i'm hole
You've taken whats left of my hopes,
I'm nothing now, nothing more
Nothing except yours.

[Cnc_theft_auto]

wow, that was excellent laci! really, really nice. it paints a really vivid image in my mind, and all good writing should be able to achieve that.

[laci_baby]

Thank you darling. Not one of my best, but i seem to like it just the same.

[kg211970]

wow beautiful poetry... i loved it.........

[laci_baby]

Thank you!