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Amie
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It was really good, I wish I could write like that.
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Cheryl Rendone
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Post by Cheryl Rendone »

That is great work!! Reminds me of how Ellen Hopkins writes, I love her writing!
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Nathrad Sheare
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Is this all you've written? If so, it's such a shame! There's wit here! I enjoyed it very much, Carla. I hope you continue as a poet.
Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things that escape those who only dream at night.

-Edgar Allan Poe
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It was a very life-like poem.
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Love it, well done!
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Post by dragoneyes2005 »

I read your own and really enjoyed it. It's like looking at the world through that person's eyes and going over a few life experiences that they had with them. Keep it up.
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