Keep on Movies

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Jaime Lync
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Action pack
Thriller like Mike Jack
PG-13 Comedy - Captain Jack
Eyes on the sparrow
Keep on movies
Neglecting duties
The horror
The drama
No worry
It's Sci-fi
No hurry
Keep on movies
Romance
Film-noir
A mystery adventure of the first world war
History keeps on moving
But you keep on movies
Hours of our lives in front of a screen
Taste not, touch not, just seeing
keep on movies
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This is an amazing poem. Sometimes, we neglect our duties because we keep our selves busy with our favorite movies. We forget reality because are in a fantacy movie.
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Quick hitting take on the value of entertainment in each of our own lives. I like it. Nicely done!
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