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Jaime Lync
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Baby Boo, Baby, Baby!
Bed bound, bed bounce
Booty banging, belly bloated
Belly big, Belly bigger
Brought brawling, brought bawling
Bystanders brought bandages
But Baby Boo Bye Bye!
Brutal Backstabbing Betrayal
Before bright baby boy's birth
Baby boy brought-up barbarian
Belligerent, bashful, blind
Bright, Bright, Bright!
Betimes Bishop brought biblical brilliance
Breaking Bread, bibbing blood
Baptism breakthrough
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Again, I like the rhythm here. The short lines move it along to the unique beat made by all the B words. Another good one.
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