Haiku by Anderad - Rain

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Haiku by Anderad - Rain

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Rain falls from the sky

It seeps deep into the ground

Trees reach to the clouds
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Anderdad wrote:Rain falls from the sky

It seeps deep into the ground

Trees reach to the clouds

A very nice Haiku. My compliments! It evokes somewhat the same theme captured in Shelley's poem The Cloud - a poem which I very much like. Thank you for sharing this with us. [:- )
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I love haikus, and this one especially. Really paints the image.
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I love this haiku. I have written some haikus about nature. This one will add to my collection. Thanks very much.
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Very nice! This haiku conjured up some lovely imagery. There is a unique beauty to rainy days.
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