Vampire's Sonnet
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Vampire's Sonnet
Perhaps howling wind on a stormy day
Ravens screeching their sorrows to the skies
Rose buds dying in the midst of May.
Dead seas and lone spaces where spirits dwell
Haunted woods where evil stalks the night
Would surely flee from thy eternal spell
Upon spying your darkest, blackest might
But though I live in the shadow of thy love
And you drink bitter nectar from my vein
My sweet, I wouldn't live enough
Without you I would die in vain.
For as your black soul now resides in me.
I accept and am alive in thee.
- A. Beauchamp.
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Nice work!
(*Whispering* - 5th word "your" instead of "you" maybe?)
― Steven Wright
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thank you for your very kind words. I love Shakespearean sonnets, but do not like the traditional romance they so often portray. So, I made it into a horror sonnet.
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