A Penny A Day

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lele10000
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A Penny A Day

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Hey I found a penny today my friend.
I guess that means money is headed my way again.

The more you find
The more you grow.
That's what we are here for.

Just because the amount is so small.
Does not mean it doesn't count at all.

As long as you keep pushing forward.
There will always be more...

Forever and More!! :tiphat:

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I love that your poem is simple but the message is so powerful. The penny is a representation of small accomplishments. It's saying that no matter how small something you do may be, it doesn't mean that it don't matter. Every little bit, every penny will add up to something more.
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Thank you for your input.
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I agree with Amagine. Your poetry is truly inspirational. I actually have seen a lot of people disregards a penny but I have hoarded pennies that have provided meals for a family after a while. Every penny counts. Thanks for the share.
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