Trust to rust

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Trust to rust

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When you don't enter the relationship
with a firm heart's grip on the cross
soon trust starts to rust and
you panic - frantic mindset sets in -
he is doing the same lame antic - encore!
'Why does he harass and embarrass me so?'
but if I run he might pull out his gun and
bang bang - onomatopoetic cliche ending
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bang bang - onomatopoetic cliche ending ..... LOVE IT ! *LOL*
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