Let her go!

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Ashifa_87
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Let her go!

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For the sake of her sanity just let her go
For the sake of her sanity, don’t drag her there anymore
The words
The feelings
The memories
The pain
The happiness
The tears
The smiles
Can’t you see that she cannot do this anymore?
The love you gave her has gone out the door
All she wants is to be set free
And be able to run far away from your memory
So let her go, let her be free
She was never a part of your memory.
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Once absorbed, I have felt these words before. At first, I didn't grasp the happiness and the smiles until I read the last line.
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Post by stoppoppingtheP »

Nice poem, but when I read the title I thought it had something to do with the movie 'Frozen' :D

“there have been so many times
i have seen a man wanting to weep
but
instead
beat his heart until it was unconscious.

-masculine”

― Nayyirah Waheed
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