Smart Phone Dumb Life

Use this forum to post short stories that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links.
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Wasif Ahmed
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Re: Smart Phone Dumb Life

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I really enjoyed reading your story. You could have uploaded this story on Amazon.
When people say you've changed, it just means that you have stopped living your life, their way.
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Max Oberon
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Hi ebeth, thanks for reading my short story Smart Phone.. Dumb Life. I appreciate your taking the trouble to post about it, very much appreciated. Best wishes from Australia, Max
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