How to START to write a story
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- Dream Catcher
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Re: How to START to write a story
- rines
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A story is always going to be a work in progress not matter how finished you think you are. I learned that the hard way-after 13 years of editing and re-editing something that just finally got published. Even now, I want to change things in it.
But anyways, the most important thing to remember in your writing, other than confidence is that no one is as harsh a critic as you and if you don't have what you like in your story-don't kill it. Keep working on it until it gets there. Hard work and dedication are talents, not skills (My opinion but no one has to agree with that).
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There are certain ways that people (especially teachers) say to use as a beginning to your stories. I sometimes use them, but they're a good start. Look them up. They're ways to catch the readers' attention. for instance, you could start your stories with dialogue or an ominous question. Maybe describe a setting in the first paragraph.
This thread has helped me find a lot of great tips for my own writing. I hope this helped.
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Outline thing like:
What you want to write about.
What is the general story you have in mind and where do you need it to go (start, middle and end).
What points do you want to make in the story
Who is the main character
Who are the other characters (or fill these in as you go).
After you put a plan together your creative writing should take over. Kind of like saying "I want to go west to see the pacific ocean"... and the writing explains the details of the journey.
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Instead, I just write as far as I can, and try to get into the main part of the plot, and the parts I like, as fast as possible. It's a bit of a Nanowrimo tactic (writing as much as you can as fast as possible) but it works well enough for me.
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Here are some from the books I own that I've randomly grabbed off the shelf for you:
"As the school bus disappeared into the distance, Amy Fleming shifted her backpack onto her shoulder and headed up the long drive leading to Heartland." (This gives us information about the people, places, etc.)
"Most peopler think that death is the end." (I like that one... it's ominous and forboding!)
"My name is not Mara Dyer, but my lawyer told me I had to choose something." (Intriguing... we want to know why her lawyer made her pick a new name!)
"I'd never given much thought to how I would die--though I'd had reason enough in the last few months--but even if I had, I would not have imagined it like this." (Interesting... is the character dying now? We want to read more!)
"Alison Parker saw the letter first." (A direct statement of fact to get the story underway.)
"Guess who?" (A line of dialogue isn't a bad way to get your story started!)
"The blue station wagon had just come around a shart bend in the road when the creature stepped out of the woods." (Descriptive of the action and conveys a lot of images in one sentence!)
Try it with your book collection! It's kind of fun!