Build Our Own Story (Game)
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Build Our Own Story (Game)
The rules would be that you need to let at least two other people contribute before you add in another portion. Sound good? OK I will start it off.
Felix thinks of himself as a pretty average guy. He goes to a typical boring pretentious private school, and lives in a boring suburb outside of Chicago. *BEEP BEEP BOOP BEEP BOOP* He groans awake and slaps his R2D2 alarm clock to the floor. He slowly sits up squinting against the morning sunshine. "Crap."
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In 15 more minutes I was in the kitchen reaching out for my favorite cereal while I saw my sister having a small mug filled with coffee in her hand. I could see that she hated the taste, so I tentatively asked her "How is the coffee, Liz?"
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"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife."
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"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife."
Mrs. Bennet
- Skillian
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"About time!" an angry man yells upon seeing Felix. "Ummm... good morning. Just a second," he replies as he struggles with his keys. He gets the door open, and the man pushes him aside allowing a steady flow of people in. Felix stands there dumbfounded for a minute before he shouts, "What is going on?!"
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