I let potentially amazing story ideas slip away
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- RheaGrey
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I let potentially amazing story ideas slip away
How do you writers do it? Do you start by basically 'brain spewing' your ideas onto paper or a Word Doc.? And then working on it slowly and meticulously until it turns into something? Do some authors have staff that organize their story for them?
Maybe what I need is a voice recorder so I can just talk out my basic story idea...
It's just such a pity I let these good ideas go to waste.
- jbriannerobbins
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You seem to have the motivation to start the process of writing, which is the first step, and have a idea of how to do this (recorder). I would suggest you try and start there. Like a painting, writing can always be improved so there really isn't a finished product. Harness your idea (s) and challenge your self to stay in the present moment and continue to follow that idea rather than the end result. Also keep in mind, what may work for others may not work for you in regards to writing. Good luck!
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Hi, thanks for responding!jbriannerobbins wrote:I'm not a writer but can empathize with having ideas and not following through with doing anything with them or as you put it "let them slip away". For me, these ideas occur at the most inconvenient times like when I'm driving in the car or when I simply to not have a pen and paper (or computer).
You seem to have the motivation to start the process of writing, which is the first step, and have a idea of how to do this (recorder). I would suggest you try and start there. Like a painting, writing can always be improved so there really isn't a finished product. Harness your idea (s) and challenge your self to stay in the present moment and continue to follow that idea rather than the end result. Also keep in mind, what may work for others may not work for you in regards to writing. Good luck!
I love the idea of writing my own book. But I don't know if I can follow through with it. I think maybe I tend to look at the whole project and get intimidated, so I like your advice about trying to stay in the present moment.
Thanks!
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I tend to find myself having the opposite problem...I want to write, but never know what to write about! Oh well, that's when I just read
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It's okay though I just pick up a book instead .
Anyway my advice (keep in mind I am probably the last person you want advise from but I'm going to give it to you anyway ) is to just write and after you get to the point you are happy make your friends read it and tell you the damage then you go and edit. In the end lets say you get 5-10 chapters in, reread EVERYTHING and edit it do this ever so ofter so you don't have too much to edit in the end and plus this helps more idea flow (in my opinion ... then again I am not a professional or anything)
Either way GOOD LUCK!!! and keep us updated
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Hahaha, thank you for your enthusiastic feedback/advice. I love it.Balabanianm97 wrote:I know exactly what you mean!!! Although sometimes I will actually sit down and write for a good 3 weeks and I will get somewhere right! And then I realize I hate it and I stop writing
It's okay though I just pick up a book instead .
Anyway my advice (keep in mind I am probably the last person you want advise from but I'm going to give it to you anyway ) is to just write and after you get to the point you are happy make your friends read it and tell you the damage then you go and edit. In the end lets say you get 5-10 chapters in, reread EVERYTHING and edit it do this ever so ofter so you don't have too much to edit in the end and plus this helps more idea flow (in my opinion ... then again I am not a professional or anything)
Either way GOOD LUCK!!! and keep us updated
I think that maybe I will start slow and take this story bit by bit. I am just worried that I will put a ton of effort into it and then one day be like, "Meh", and scrap it. Sort of like what you said you do! I actually used to do that a lot when I was younger. I have a ton of old, unfinished stories on my old computer.
I will give it a try,
and will definitely keep you all updated if that's what you want.
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And sometimes, Balabanianm, it helps to check back after a few weeks and see how you feel about it. If you still hate it, maybe there's something else you can do with it? Or you might find a few redeeming passages you can work into something else. It's all about leaving it for a while! (That being said, I tend to hate my work *more* after I leave it for a while...so who knows if that helps at all!)
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Yay thank you I would love to be updated :3 maybe you can private message me?RheaGrey wrote:Hahaha, thank you for your enthusiastic feedback/advice. I love it.Balabanianm97 wrote:I know exactly what you mean!!! Although sometimes I will actually sit down and write for a good 3 weeks and I will get somewhere right! And then I realize I hate it and I stop writing
It's okay though I just pick up a book instead .
Anyway my advice (keep in mind I am probably the last person you want advise from but I'm going to give it to you anyway ) is to just write and after you get to the point you are happy make your friends read it and tell you the damage then you go and edit. In the end lets say you get 5-10 chapters in, reread EVERYTHING and edit it do this ever so ofter so you don't have too much to edit in the end and plus this helps more idea flow (in my opinion ... then again I am not a professional or anything)
Either way GOOD LUCK!!! and keep us updated
I think that maybe I will start slow and take this story bit by bit. I am just worried that I will put a ton of effort into it and then one day be like, "Meh", and scrap it. Sort of like what you said you do! I actually used to do that a lot when I was younger. I have a ton of old, unfinished stories on my old computer.
I will give it a try,
and will definitely keep you all updated if that's what you want.
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I know what you mean!!!!! Although leaving it for a bit does help with editing I'll give it back But I haven't written in like 3 month damn I go through phases you know? idk it just might be me and my weird selfannareads wrote:Please do keep us updated!
And sometimes, Balabanianm, it helps to check back after a few weeks and see how you feel about it. If you still hate it, maybe there's something else you can do with it? Or you might find a few redeeming passages you can work into something else. It's all about leaving it for a while! (That being said, I tend to hate my work *more* after I leave it for a while...so who knows if that helps at all!)
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Same I am currently in a reading stage though ... You know when I am not busy with the 50 million things I have to do. Or you know Netflix I know I'm terrible!! I have my AP Biology summer work due tomorrow and I am less than half way done... I have about 3 hours of work in front of me... and I am on Netflix right now, watching Psych.annareads wrote:Nah I go through phases too, believe me. I'm in a bit of a dry spell right now, but I've got notebooks of old stuff I can go through...although to be honest I'm putting it off haha.
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Sometimes, though, like everyone says, you just have to write. Even if it feels like you're writing the worst thing ever and you just want to give up, get out a couple of pages. Skip to the parts you really wanted to write. Even if those don't work out where you thought they would, you might end up reusing them for something better.
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Nobody's gonna write the short story or novel for you. You can fool yourself by keeping ideas tucked away in notebooks but that is a dead end. A long-time saying is that the "great American novel" sits unwritten in everyone's top desk drawer. Nowadays that same novel dusts away on a hard drive.
I'm an actual real writer, with 2 novels sold and published, a 3rd just completed (as yet unsold), numerous articles and some short fiction also published, plus many, many book and movie reviews.
You write by starting. Sadly the mysterious elves won't write that book for you overnight, as you aren't a shoemaker.
One person recommended a way to start is to jot down a single chapter or scene that's vivid in your mind, and work from there. Excellent advice. If you have trouble starting with "Chapter One: I am born." then forget chapter 1, and start "in medias res" by writing that vivid scene first. You'll soon learn to add to this and build the story around a central important chapter.
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The object of "writing" is to produce something that's actually readable, something that's actually published. Random exegesis fragments aren't much good unless they're formed into a short story, essay, article, novel, or whatever. Otherwise it's a waste. It's like a bunch of iron ore that sits in a heap until it's forged into a skillet or door or car or whatever. Raw materials extant in jotted notes are only of value after they're "forged" into that story. If you let amazing story ideas slide away, grab yourself by the scruff of the neck and make yourself start using those ideas productively. And when you get stuck, come back here and we'll help get you un-stuck.
So hey, get busy, gang!