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I think it really depends on how well you write it. If it's just weird and doesn't have anything to do with the story, then you should avoid it. But I don't mind dreams in stories, as long as it contribute to the plot and isn't there just for the sake of being there (like anything in a story, really).
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I don't know if I like it when it's ment to trick the reader. But maybe that's just cause I was tricked
Chloe Neill's dream sequences work, for me at least.
In other words, I have nothing against them.
Done well they can really be interesting, and from a writing standpoint, they can be a good way to work around/through the plot and pleight of your characters.
They can be a blessing or a curse to your characters so it's a strong device in my opinion.
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Grief is just love with no place to go.
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Anyway, in this current book, it started off in a dream sequence, then it cut to real life, and that was all fine and dandy because I got it. And then later on in the book, more dream sequences would come up, and I understood they were dreams because they were always off the wall stuff and action/fighting going on. But then later a chapter opened up with a bunch of fighting, and I assumed that it was another dream sequence, but then it turned out to be real! It shocked me. It was like a reverse dream sequence. Does that even make sense? But anyway, it surprised me, and I thought it was well done.
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I read a book the other week which was a mystery and the author used a dream sequence which fit into the suspense of the storyline in a very clever way.
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Hahaha! And that, for some reason, makes me think of Wayne's World!rssllue wrote:Dream sequences always make me think of Scooby-Doo for some reason.
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