A short by me: Beauty

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A short by me: Beauty

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Beauty comes in many different forms, from the physical to the mental. And is also circumstantial. What I find beautiful you may find ordinary, and vise versa. Beauty has caused pain, joy, war, peace, and ambition. Beauty is the reason people paint, draw, write, in the hopes that they may weave something of beauty. Beauty is something everyone from the youthful to the old, strive for, we all want to be beautiful. Yet what we do not realize is that we are all beautiful in one way or another. We all hold beauty. For beauty is not rare it's plentiful, we all have it, we just have many different sorts of beauty. Beauty is much like love, it has infinite faces, and infinite meanings none are wrong, just different perceptions of the same character.
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I like it and agree. Sounds like poetic prose.
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Has the shape and feel of prose poetry? Do you write much verse at all?
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Has the rythm of prose, as well as being without a standardized stanza structure.
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