Which came first: the characters or the story?
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Re: Which came first: the characters or the story?
I suppose for me it can go both ways. I've had characters spawn from story ideas, and story ideas spawn from characters. Although I personally believe that finding an idea to fit a character is usually more fun
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Here's an example:
I created an eccentric former mercenary in a little short story once, then ended up with a book about her foray into becoming an owner and CEO of a private weapons development company, all with her running around with green hair and fighting with congresssmen.
See what happens when you play "what would happen if?"
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Other times, a character appears, and in working out who they are and where they came from I also figure out what story of theirs is waiting to be told. If this happens, then other characters develop as I work out the story, but I have yet to have two characters come to me both demanding attention simultaneously - I'm not sure how it would work out if that happened.
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I think story comes first and then characters are developed according to story.taykay08 wrote:My friend is a writer, and the other day she explained to me something that I found very interesting. She keeps a collection of characters that she has created, some fully fleshed out, and then thinks up stories that those characters can fit into.
This just seemed like a very interesting - but unusual - method. I always assumed that any writer of fiction thinks up a story and then fleshes its characters later. So, to any writers out there: Do you use a similar method? Or, have you ever heard of anyone else using this process?
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This is something I can never get my brother to understand. I'll be talking about a character (like she is a real person) and be like "Well, she used to be [this]" or "She used to do [that]' and he's always getting frustrated with me and telling me that, actually, she didn't used to do anything because she is not real. We fight a lot about this.agoodbook03 wrote:Characters have a life before and after a story.
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It can lead to some surprisingly heated debates. I do improvisational, long-form comedy, and this topic has brought quite a few theatre nerds close to raining blows on each other.jhollan2 wrote:This is something I can never get my brother to understand. I'll be talking about a character (like she is a real person) and be like "Well, she used to be [this]" or "She used to do [that]' and he's always getting frustrated with me and telling me that, actually, she didn't used to do anything because she is not real. We fight a lot about this.agoodbook03 wrote:Characters have a life before and after a story.
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There's a thin line to this, because really, the characters don't exist outside of what the author made them. So if the author gave them a back story, great, they have a back story. But it's immature analytically to say that "if this happened instead, then...", or "if the story when on then they would do this..." because they didn't. It isn't as if we're speculating on real events, in which every conceivable outcome is a possibility. But in a book or story, nothing exists outside of what the author wrote. Don't get me wrong, I speculate and imagine as much as anyone. (I love to write fanfiction, which requires that you do exactly what I just said not to.) But if you're trying to analyse or review something in a professional setting, or around people who either don't read or read very avidly, you're not going to sound like you know what you'r talking about if you refer to events and characters in a story outside of what the author wrote them as. On a happier and less accusatory note, when you write something and create characters for it, you can do or say whatever the frick frack patty wack you want with them because they're yours, and your the god of whatever universe you created them for.agoodbook03 wrote:It can lead to some surprisingly heated debates. I do improvisational, long-form comedy, and this topic has brought quite a few theatre nerds close to raining blows on each other.jhollan2 wrote:This is something I can never get my brother to understand. I'll be talking about a character (like she is a real person) and be like "Well, she used to be [this]" or "She used to do [that]' and he's always getting frustrated with me and telling me that, actually, she didn't used to do anything because she is not real. We fight a lot about this.agoodbook03 wrote:Characters have a life before and after a story.
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Generally, I begin with a character with a need, desire, or challenge first. I walk around with their story percolating within me, and eventually, I am ready to write it down. By that time, I feel like I have crawled inside their skin, and I have to get their story down on paper. What I love is when a principle character from one story becomes a secondary or tertiary character in another. I love the feeling of community it builds in many of my short stories. I even have drafted a map of their fictional town. (Thank-you Dad, for letting the child-me hover over your desk when you were working on town plans.) So when a character walks to Stoddard's hardware store to buy a rake, they pause to admire the swans on the pond, or give in to the tantalizing aroma of fresh-baked goods from Russo's bakery.
Occasionally, I write about characters outside my town, but even if it is not overtly stated in the story, I know they have a tie to the community in some way. It keeps me grounded as I explore their stories.
That's right, I have a muse. It is spelled MusE. My writing is influenced by the interactions of people I meet - us and ME.