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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Complete Diaries of Young Arthur Conan Doyle" by John Raffensperger and Richard Krevolin.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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The Complete Diaries of Young Arthur Conan Doyle by John Raffensperger and Richard Krevolin consists of three fictitious journals supposedly written by Arthur Conan Doyle himself, the author of the original Sherlock novels. The book attempts to describe how he gained the inspiration for writing his books while learning to practice medicine by observing his mentor, Dr. Bell, use the power of deduction to provide incredible diagnoses.

It's an exciting book overall - the action scenes are written very well, and the mysteries, while some details are a bit predictable, are suspenseful and wonderfully over-the-top. The characters, for the most part, are distinct and engaging, with a variety of villains and motives. In my opinion, one of the book's strengths was in its dialogue. I was also surprised by how in-depth the medical procedures were, and Dr. Bell's diagnoses even taught me about some medical concepts I wasn't aware of.

From scene to scene, this book was very strong. Where it came apart a bit was with its overarching plot. Doyle met people who are now famous at every stage of his journey, particularly writers, and the dramatic action and schemes felt quite at odds with the aspects of the book that were grounded in reality. I also felt that, as a narrator, Doyle was rather weak. One of his character traits is that he develops crushes on practically every attractive woman he meets, and this became very tiring, especially when it came at the cost of learning more about the female characters themselves.

It's also worth mentioning the copious grammatical errors. There weren't as many issues with confusing homonyms as I often see in similar writing, but a large number of conjunctions had issues with commas, and there were also many instances of using apostrophes for plural nouns. This was so prevalent that it couldn't help but be distracting. It also felt strangely contradictory to the otherwise rather intellectual writing style, which included words like "obeisance" in addition to scientific medical terms.

Despite its flaws, I had a great deal of fun reading The Complete Diaries of Young Arthur Conan Doyle. However, relying so much on happenstance and implausibility in mystery book - and realistic fiction, no less - was a serious detriment to the book. When compounded with the grammatical errors, I can only rate this book 2 out of 4 stars. I'd recommend it to fans of action and medical thriller books; people strictly interested in mystery books are likely to be disappointed.

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I enjoyed your review, and appreciate your honest recommendation. However, the in-depth medical procedures do not appeal to me. Also, adding apostrophes to nonpossessive plurals is one of my biggest pet peeves.
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Doyle reminds me of James Bond who always has a weakness for beautiful women. The book sounds really exciting and suspenseful as you have described. Thank you for your insightful review.
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Post by Samantha Simoneau »

I was excited about this one when I saw it on the review-opportunities list, but now I'm glad I bypassed it. The implausibilities and especially the use of apostrophes to make words plural would drive me bonkers. Great review!
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Your review is really interesting. I really like how you comment on so many different aspects of the book. I might try this one, but not right away. Good job!
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As a fan of the Sherlock Holmes books, the title of this review is what caught my eye and prompted me to read it. Given the title of the book, had i seen it on a shelf in the store, I would have been tempted to buy it. Thanks for the informative review. It does pique my interest in the book based on your description of it and I may still end up reading it, although the grammatical errors you mention may bother me somewhat during the reading. However, that being said, the review you gave actually makes me more curious to read the book if nothing else, just to see all of the things you are talking about. Thanks for the review. Wonderful job!!!
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I appreciate your honest review, but please write a summary of this read. Thank you for your review!
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Post by Manang Muyang »

I have the complete set of Sherlock Holmes novels and short stories. This book would be a good addition to my collection. But I will have to wait until the author has cured the imperfection's, ooops!
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This would have been a wish come true for Sherlock fans everywhere. Too bad about the errors, but it's the weakness of the narrative that is more of a turn-off for me.
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Post by kandscreeley »

The grammar errors would definitely get on my nerves. It's interesting what you say about Doyle being a ladies man, though. Somehow it seemed to work for James Bond. Still, I don't think this is the book for me. Thanks for the information, though.
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